for Snow1/29/2004 c1 
12TheLionsPaleProtector
This was my favorite. i love snow too and how it sparkles, lays over the earth like a blanket. of course winter is my favorite season- i just don't like the cold and shoveling a foot of snow!
12TheLionsPaleProtectorThis was my favorite. i love snow too and how it sparkles, lays over the earth like a blanket. of course winter is my favorite season- i just don't like the cold and shoveling a foot of snow!
1/28/2004 c1 Jane Austen
This is not one of my favorites...Dont mind Mr. Bigglesworth-she is a dick! but i dont think she was criticizing your poem structure so much as she was criticizing the rythym when read. I know that even for me, this got a little bulky at the end. And, i prefer poems that do not rhyme. so i see where she was coming from.
This is not one of my favorites...Dont mind Mr. Bigglesworth-she is a dick! but i dont think she was criticizing your poem structure so much as she was criticizing the rythym when read. I know that even for me, this got a little bulky at the end. And, i prefer poems that do not rhyme. so i see where she was coming from.
1/28/2004 c1 133S.C. Preclarus Noctis
That's awesome! I like your rhyming..but I think you kind of lost your rhythm near the second to the last stanza(last two tlnes) Or..I dunno. Maybe it's just me and I can't read. Pwahahah.
-Sandie-
133S.C. Preclarus NoctisThat's awesome! I like your rhyming..but I think you kind of lost your rhythm near the second to the last stanza(last two tlnes) Or..I dunno. Maybe it's just me and I can't read. Pwahahah.
-Sandie-
1/28/2004 c1 100Keep it 100
This was refreshing and calming to read. Nice work on this. By the way, just ignore the review by bigglesworth. Some people just like to be that way.
100Keep it 100This was refreshing and calming to read. Nice work on this. By the way, just ignore the review by bigglesworth. Some people just like to be that way.
1/28/2004 c1 118origamikitty
Alright, just a few things to say. Not once did I say I thought I was a great poet. Not once. I do it because I enjoy it. Also, in my profile, it SAYS that I have never been taught the structure of poems. Therefore, I am not completely sure HOW to write them correctly. I do what seems right to me. And all that review did was waste my time, and waste yours. It was in no way constructive. If you think I suck, why don't you try and help instead of just being a dick about it. Alright?
118origamikittyAlright, just a few things to say. Not once did I say I thought I was a great poet. Not once. I do it because I enjoy it. Also, in my profile, it SAYS that I have never been taught the structure of poems. Therefore, I am not completely sure HOW to write them correctly. I do what seems right to me. And all that review did was waste my time, and waste yours. It was in no way constructive. If you think I suck, why don't you try and help instead of just being a dick about it. Alright?
1/28/2004 c1 bigglesworth
this, again, is without a doubt one of the worst things i've read. so it rhymes! so what? the rythym is all wrong, very difficult to read. poets these days. think they're the greatest
this, again, is without a doubt one of the worst things i've read. so it rhymes! so what? the rythym is all wrong, very difficult to read. poets these days. think they're the greatest
1/28/2004 c1 Butterfly Radcliffe
I always thought of snow as something peaceful as well. Great job!
~Faith, Hope and Love
I always thought of snow as something peaceful as well. Great job!
~Faith, Hope and Love