for These Days1/30/2004 c1 
3Taka ichijouji
I really liked the Ringo Star reference. It's a good way to end and comparisons (I forgot the grammatical term) are always welcome in my book. I also liked the way you repeated words. It gave it a creative feature that was very original. Congrats!
3Taka ichijoujiI really liked the Ringo Star reference. It's a good way to end and comparisons (I forgot the grammatical term) are always welcome in my book. I also liked the way you repeated words. It gave it a creative feature that was very original. Congrats!
1/29/2004 c1 12TheLionsPaleProtector
Hey, nice poem- i liked 'Dark Secrets' too, interesting. You like the Beatles too?
12TheLionsPaleProtectorHey, nice poem- i liked 'Dark Secrets' too, interesting. You like the Beatles too?
1/28/2004 c1 Jane Austen
This is very creative. I like that you used Ringo, being a big Beatles fan myself. I like the repeating word thing...reminds me of a poem of one of my good friends (and clients) brothers. I think you are gifted and I hope you continue to express yourself thru your writing.
This is very creative. I like that you used Ringo, being a big Beatles fan myself. I like the repeating word thing...reminds me of a poem of one of my good friends (and clients) brothers. I think you are gifted and I hope you continue to express yourself thru your writing.
1/28/2004 c1 bigglesworth
this poem is horrible! whatever were you thinking! i can't believe you still write poetry. So detrimental to society today. my my, i am going to have to wash my mouth out after that horrid thing you call poetry. Do us a favor, and quit writing!
thank you
bigglesworth
this poem is horrible! whatever were you thinking! i can't believe you still write poetry. So detrimental to society today. my my, i am going to have to wash my mouth out after that horrid thing you call poetry. Do us a favor, and quit writing!
thank you
bigglesworth
1/27/2004 c1 54TalieZ
Hmm, it was interesting, didnt expect Ringo to make an apperence. Oh, about my poem you just reviewed. I put in disgusted by man, because if i said disgusted by men, it would be sexist. When you read the bible, you will find that when talking about the human race it refers to man, woMan and Man. So it doesnt fit in with the poem if i used the word men. Just had to clear that up. Liked your poem ^_^
54TalieZHmm, it was interesting, didnt expect Ringo to make an apperence. Oh, about my poem you just reviewed. I put in disgusted by man, because if i said disgusted by men, it would be sexist. When you read the bible, you will find that when talking about the human race it refers to man, woMan and Man. So it doesnt fit in with the poem if i used the word men. Just had to clear that up. Liked your poem ^_^