for Wilton Chyle1/28/2004 c1 
4Medron Pryde
Dang. That really is a dark world. A place where someone can be killed for breaking and entering. As for the writing. Impressive. I could see what he was thinking. Feel what he was feeling. You nailed it, and fully and completely let the reader see what the character saw. You're improving. *Adds to favorite stories list*
4Medron PrydeDang. That really is a dark world. A place where someone can be killed for breaking and entering. As for the writing. Impressive. I could see what he was thinking. Feel what he was feeling. You nailed it, and fully and completely let the reader see what the character saw. You're improving. *Adds to favorite stories list*