Reviews: Summer Rain | FictionPress

2/10/2004 c1

69til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton
*blinks* the visualizations are surperb!
"Of red-orange flame
Originating in a hollow heart
Licking at my raw insides"
I specifically like this part of this piece. ..i enjoyed it quite well. Keep up the wonderful work

1/31/2004 c1

8Written
Hey! Love your word usage. This poem is sightly enigmatic to me, but I like that. The images are simply amazing. . . I can feel it. . . see it. The last few lines are very well done, too. I liked it a lot, good work!