
2/8/2004 c1
16Suteru
I still believe this is the best poem of yours I've read yet.
Or maybe I just haven't read as many of your poems as I think I have... or something. ::gets confused::
She *still* doesn't know? What a dolt.
Maybe we should spell it out for her.
I got close today. I said that the only problem I have with James is that when he's around *she* ignores everybody. But she turned it around on him, saying he's shy and she doesn't understand why he clams up when he's around her friends.
"...they're going to be *our* friends, aren't they?"
is what she askes him. And he says yes and she says to talk to them, you can't be friends with someone without talking to them.
She needs to listen to her friends as well as herself more often, it seems.
-KRiS
(my, what a long review...)

I still believe this is the best poem of yours I've read yet.
Or maybe I just haven't read as many of your poems as I think I have... or something. ::gets confused::
She *still* doesn't know? What a dolt.
Maybe we should spell it out for her.
I got close today. I said that the only problem I have with James is that when he's around *she* ignores everybody. But she turned it around on him, saying he's shy and she doesn't understand why he clams up when he's around her friends.
"...they're going to be *our* friends, aren't they?"
is what she askes him. And he says yes and she says to talk to them, you can't be friends with someone without talking to them.
She needs to listen to her friends as well as herself more often, it seems.
-KRiS
(my, what a long review...)
1/28/2004 c1
5Crazy Senorita
That was beautiful.. I have a poem like that its called Only One Trying.. but yours was great. *snaps*

That was beautiful.. I have a poem like that its called Only One Trying.. but yours was great. *snaps*