for Patricks and Westerns6/1/2004 c25 Shyann v. mad
Are you mental! Who ends a good story like that? They were supposed to end up together! Ug... You ruined your own story do you realize that? That is really the absoult worst thing you could have done!
Are you mental! Who ends a good story like that? They were supposed to end up together! Ug... You ruined your own story do you realize that? That is really the absoult worst thing you could have done!
5/26/2004 c25 ayan
I liked your story up until the last fight. I mean, is greg bipolar or something?One minute he loves her and the next he's telling her that shes white trash?
I liked your story up until the last fight. I mean, is greg bipolar or something?One minute he loves her and the next he's telling her that shes white trash?
5/21/2004 c25 jsprincess247
gr8 story. ur a gr8 writer. i just hate the ending i think it wouldve been nicer if they ended up together. well good job.
gr8 story. ur a gr8 writer. i just hate the ending i think it wouldve been nicer if they ended up together. well good job.
5/15/2004 c25 procrastinator
gosh.
i will honestly hate you forever & ever if you dont write a sequel. i cried at chapter 24 . i spent my whole entire saturday reading your story so please tell me you will write a sequel. ok? :D thanks for writing such an awesome story. i made my day.
gosh.
i will honestly hate you forever & ever if you dont write a sequel. i cried at chapter 24 . i spent my whole entire saturday reading your story so please tell me you will write a sequel. ok? :D thanks for writing such an awesome story. i made my day.
5/15/2004 c25 Stevshals
Please write a sequel. This story is so good.
Please write a sequel. This story is so good.
5/13/2004 c20 
5oreos
wow, i certainly was not expecting that twist! sophie's pregnant? but it's a good technique to tie in the past with the present. but wow, she's only fifteen! that jerk brian or whatever his name is better not desert her.
5oreoswow, i certainly was not expecting that twist! sophie's pregnant? but it's a good technique to tie in the past with the present. but wow, she's only fifteen! that jerk brian or whatever his name is better not desert her.
5/13/2004 c17 oreos
yay! i'm so glad greg changed for the better! i love the idea that guys can think we look great even when we don't. and i'm glad greg didn't do anything serious at the party because that would have been bad. anyway, great job!
yay! i'm so glad greg changed for the better! i love the idea that guys can think we look great even when we don't. and i'm glad greg didn't do anything serious at the party because that would have been bad. anyway, great job!
5/13/2004 c14 oreos
aww, i love greg's parents! but that's so sad about isabelle's mom. again, great job!
aww, i love greg's parents! but that's so sad about isabelle's mom. again, great job!
5/12/2004 c9 oreos
what a jerk! i can't believe him! and i thought girls were mainly stupid when it came to love. but he is amusing to read!
what a jerk! i can't believe him! and i thought girls were mainly stupid when it came to love. but he is amusing to read!
5/12/2004 c8 oreos
omg, i so take back what i said about liking greg! i knew it! how horrible he is! but maybe he'll end up falling in love, like tommy did? (i hope)
i admit it gets a little confusing and it's like, woa, when you first start reading the point of view of greg. i think it would be easier on the reader if maybe sometime you tried doing it in third person because then it's easier to switch from each person's thoughts. at least, i think it is, but it could just be me! great job!
omg, i so take back what i said about liking greg! i knew it! how horrible he is! but maybe he'll end up falling in love, like tommy did? (i hope)
i admit it gets a little confusing and it's like, woa, when you first start reading the point of view of greg. i think it would be easier on the reader if maybe sometime you tried doing it in third person because then it's easier to switch from each person's thoughts. at least, i think it is, but it could just be me! great job!
5/12/2004 c3 oreos
i definitely did not expect isabelle to be honest with greg in telling him where she lived. stories usually end up where the poor girl conceals the truth she's poor for a long time, and then the guy finds out and feels betrayed, etc. i love how you definitely took your own road. excellent job!
i definitely did not expect isabelle to be honest with greg in telling him where she lived. stories usually end up where the poor girl conceals the truth she's poor for a long time, and then the guy finds out and feels betrayed, etc. i love how you definitely took your own road. excellent job!
5/12/2004 c1 oreos
i love your story! it really is amazing how divided even one town can be. i think you portray the narrator's feelings and fears very well. great job!
i love your story! it really is amazing how divided even one town can be. i think you portray the narrator's feelings and fears very well. great job!
5/11/2004 c25 JadeLioness1600
Omg! I was crying when i red the last chapter. I was so sad. But I'm glad you ended it like that. Its better. Well...hmm...wat 2 say? r u going to rite mor? idk...write more. c ya.
Omg! I was crying when i red the last chapter. I was so sad. But I'm glad you ended it like that. Its better. Well...hmm...wat 2 say? r u going to rite mor? idk...write more. c ya.
5/10/2004 c25 2The Untalented
I must say this is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. I'm only disappointed that Greg didn't follow her, but that is life, right? Life isn't meant to be a fairy tale, I suppose. I have to admit, I was reluctant to finish reading about halfway through the story! I'm not a big fan of angst and drama, but I'm happy that I read this! Excellent job!
2The UntalentedI must say this is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. I'm only disappointed that Greg didn't follow her, but that is life, right? Life isn't meant to be a fairy tale, I suppose. I have to admit, I was reluctant to finish reading about halfway through the story! I'm not a big fan of angst and drama, but I'm happy that I read this! Excellent job!