for Patricks and Westerns5/6/2004 c25 
1silverusagi
Wow! all I have to say this story is very beautifully written.
It really made me weld up tears I hope to see more storys from me.
I see you have a knack for writing even though it was a sad ending.
It was a beautifully written ending ^-^
1silverusagiWow! all I have to say this story is very beautifully written.
It really made me weld up tears I hope to see more storys from me.
I see you have a knack for writing even though it was a sad ending.
It was a beautifully written ending ^-^
5/6/2004 c25 darkshadow
i love your story so much ! its so touching and i want to read it again and again, thanks so much for writing such a wonderful book!
i love your story so much ! its so touching and i want to read it again and again, thanks so much for writing such a wonderful book!
5/6/2004 c11 sKiBbLeS
i love your story and all but i thought belle's friend's name was Mallory.but this one says melanie
i love your story and all but i thought belle's friend's name was Mallory.but this one says melanie
5/6/2004 c23 Tangle Elftree
Oh gee... He's still a jerk in my eyes. I'm sorry, but he keeps reverting back! It's infuriating! I'm glad you're not making Belle one of those, 'Oh darling! I'll always forgive you!' I'm sorry, but that's just disgusting. Hoorah! Hoorah for Belle! And GREAT job! I love the characters - they're ones you definitely bond with!
Oh gee... He's still a jerk in my eyes. I'm sorry, but he keeps reverting back! It's infuriating! I'm glad you're not making Belle one of those, 'Oh darling! I'll always forgive you!' I'm sorry, but that's just disgusting. Hoorah! Hoorah for Belle! And GREAT job! I love the characters - they're ones you definitely bond with!
5/5/2004 c23 3jester on the sideline
u know, I'm sitting here crying...so you better get the next chapter up...or i'll sit here crying, forever...and ever...and ever
3jester on the sidelineu know, I'm sitting here crying...so you better get the next chapter up...or i'll sit here crying, forever...and ever...and ever
5/5/2004 c23 2CynicInLove
stupid insensitive jerk fuck tard. please mind the language. why in the friggin world would he say she was a western! and insult her when he was trying to rectify the situation? MORON! no freakin brain. that's what. please update sooN!
2CynicInLovestupid insensitive jerk fuck tard. please mind the language. why in the friggin world would he say she was a western! and insult her when he was trying to rectify the situation? MORON! no freakin brain. that's what. please update sooN!
5/4/2004 c23 Bright Indian stars
really good, but get them together faster, it's taking to long :D but i like it yeah, it's a good peice.
really good, but get them together faster, it's taking to long :D but i like it yeah, it's a good peice.
5/4/2004 c23 4anatidaephobiac
still hating greg here... stupid jerk... bah. but... this chapter sorta made me feel bad for him. SORTA. After all he still keeps hurting her... this time with the western thing... now he has a deadline... gotta fix things quick. he better do something big. like fly to paris on the same plane and lock himself in the bathroom with her. (okay not such a great example) update soon!
4anatidaephobiacstill hating greg here... stupid jerk... bah. but... this chapter sorta made me feel bad for him. SORTA. After all he still keeps hurting her... this time with the western thing... now he has a deadline... gotta fix things quick. he better do something big. like fly to paris on the same plane and lock himself in the bathroom with her. (okay not such a great example) update soon!
5/4/2004 c23 darkness falls
i didn't think this was possible but your story just keeps getting better and better
i didn't think this was possible but your story just keeps getting better and better
5/4/2004 c23 AzN.sUga
that is so depressing. stop being sad okay? how many more chapters do you suppose you'll write before ending this story? just curious...cuz i really do hope that it doesn't end that way
r'voir
that is so depressing. stop being sad okay? how many more chapters do you suppose you'll write before ending this story? just curious...cuz i really do hope that it doesn't end that way
r'voir
5/4/2004 c23 Mackenzie Louise
:'( I feel his pain, as absurd as that sounds. Not because it's impossible to feel a fiction character's pain (hm...maybe that is, but it's happened before so I can't really say it is. anyway...), but because I feel HIS pain. What is WRONG with me? with HIM? *sigh* Guys are so confusing. Post more soon. I liked this chapter. It even made me cry.
:'( I feel his pain, as absurd as that sounds. Not because it's impossible to feel a fiction character's pain (hm...maybe that is, but it's happened before so I can't really say it is. anyway...), but because I feel HIS pain. What is WRONG with me? with HIM? *sigh* Guys are so confusing. Post more soon. I liked this chapter. It even made me cry.
5/4/2004 c23 2BigRed-2006
Good at least he's grown feelings. He's deserved what he's gotten. Well great chapter I love it:P I can't wait for more update soon!
2BigRed-2006Good at least he's grown feelings. He's deserved what he's gotten. Well great chapter I love it:P I can't wait for more update soon!
5/4/2004 c23 49Endowment's Seraph
oh, I don't know how he'll fix this. I can't wait to read and find out. I'm not sure I could stand the pain of going through something like that. Hell, I know I couldn't. write more soon
~~Mel
49Endowment's Seraphoh, I don't know how he'll fix this. I can't wait to read and find out. I'm not sure I could stand the pain of going through something like that. Hell, I know I couldn't. write more soon
~~Mel
5/3/2004 c22 10My Works 87
Oh no! How could her sister sleep with the guy? after what her mom went through and all the talks and the guy was popular. Didn't he have a reputation:? Oh silly hormones!
10My Works 87Oh no! How could her sister sleep with the guy? after what her mom went through and all the talks and the guy was popular. Didn't he have a reputation:? Oh silly hormones!