for Patricks and Westerns8/23/2008 c18 Daisies in Twilight
coucou! c'est moi, encore...
je crois que c'est "faire DES achats," pas "les achats"
coucou! c'est moi, encore...
je crois que c'est "faire DES achats," pas "les achats"
8/23/2008 c10 Daisies in Twilight
Bonjour!
I'm happy to read a story with French thrown in :]
Alors... I believe "why" en français is spelled "pourquoi"
no biggie, especially since Spanish doesn't have the "u" in the "por" part.
Anyways, I like your story so far :]
Bonjour!
I'm happy to read a story with French thrown in :]
Alors... I believe "why" en français is spelled "pourquoi"
no biggie, especially since Spanish doesn't have the "u" in the "por" part.
Anyways, I like your story so far :]
8/11/2008 c25 Change in the Weather
400th reviewer! wow the ending was sad, almost like you were just in a hurry to finish it.
an amazing story though! i just wish they ended up together =]
400th reviewer! wow the ending was sad, almost like you were just in a hurry to finish it.
an amazing story though! i just wish they ended up together =]
7/6/2008 c26 
5Fayre Meira
omg see this is why writers on FP needs to be able to write clear summaries. i totally hated the ending and was glad to see the reviews page that im not the only one. i mean come one, you dangle the cookie in front of us and leave us with this forlorn ending? why bother categorizing it romance in the first place - tragedy is more like it.
but i still give credit for your writing,,the skill is there - shame the plot didnt work out well
5Fayre Meiraomg see this is why writers on FP needs to be able to write clear summaries. i totally hated the ending and was glad to see the reviews page that im not the only one. i mean come one, you dangle the cookie in front of us and leave us with this forlorn ending? why bother categorizing it romance in the first place - tragedy is more like it.
but i still give credit for your writing,,the skill is there - shame the plot didnt work out well
4/16/2008 c3 5christinaxxyo
The story is going good but you're moving really fast. This is only the third chapter and she's already saying she's in love wit him. It's very unreal although the idea is good.
5christinaxxyoThe story is going good but you're moving really fast. This is only the third chapter and she's already saying she's in love wit him. It's very unreal although the idea is good.
4/16/2008 c1 christinaxxyo
This was a cute chapter but it seemed a bit odd to me for some reason. There were a few mistakes, grammar-wise, but it was good besides that. :)
This was a cute chapter but it seemed a bit odd to me for some reason. There were a few mistakes, grammar-wise, but it was good besides that. :)
1/3/2008 c26 helplessly in love
i hate the ending
wben though it was great
and sad and it made me cry
i just so sad. he shoudl of
came after her if he really
loved her. sad =(
i hate the ending
wben though it was great
and sad and it made me cry
i just so sad. he shoudl of
came after her if he really
loved her. sad =(
1/1/2008 c19 helplessly in love
aww i love this story
andi love the guy point of views
it make things so clear when u know
what the other person is thinking
=) keepup the good work=) even though u
finish this story already.
aww i love this story
andi love the guy point of views
it make things so clear when u know
what the other person is thinking
=) keepup the good work=) even though u
finish this story already.