for Patricks and Westerns4/9/2004 c16 Vincenza
He loves her! You know he does. Oh, this is unbelievable. You must have the next chapter in his POV to see if he's the pathetic little prick he was in the beginning. Write more soon!
He loves her! You know he does. Oh, this is unbelievable. You must have the next chapter in his POV to see if he's the pathetic little prick he was in the beginning. Write more soon!
4/9/2004 c16 Mackenzie Louise
I hate him, I hate him, I HATE him! At least Sissy had the courage to tell him to stop. YAY, SISSY! ^_^ So, now that Melanie has been proven right in her assumptions, and Sissy knows it, I wonder how Melanie is going to react...unless Sissy decides to not tell her and be a dishonest friend. Gr... Post more soon. Despite my increasing hatred for Greg, I loved this chapter.
I hate him, I hate him, I HATE him! At least Sissy had the courage to tell him to stop. YAY, SISSY! ^_^ So, now that Melanie has been proven right in her assumptions, and Sissy knows it, I wonder how Melanie is going to react...unless Sissy decides to not tell her and be a dishonest friend. Gr... Post more soon. Despite my increasing hatred for Greg, I loved this chapter.
4/3/2004 c15 
12FrenzyFan78
Oh the grapes of wrath. I didn't like that book. Yuck. Good luck in finishing that! hehe. write more!
~FrenzyFan78
12FrenzyFan78Oh the grapes of wrath. I didn't like that book. Yuck. Good luck in finishing that! hehe. write more!
~FrenzyFan78
3/30/2004 c15 Vincenza
I think you should have Greg's POV again and show us if he is falling in love with her or if he is still playing his little game. See, I was confused at the party thing when he said 'I think I like you more than I realized'. I didn't know if he was lying or not. Anyway, I hope you understand that I love your story and this is only a suggestion. Please write more soon!
I think you should have Greg's POV again and show us if he is falling in love with her or if he is still playing his little game. See, I was confused at the party thing when he said 'I think I like you more than I realized'. I didn't know if he was lying or not. Anyway, I hope you understand that I love your story and this is only a suggestion. Please write more soon!
3/30/2004 c3 heavenleigh5
what a cliffy! I can't believe that she told greg he didn't flirt with her! I could never do that (unless I was pissed). I'm glad they are getting on better but I'm still worried about Katy, if tessa is right, shes gonna see Greg as hers and she's not going to like belle for stealing him. great so far! ill be back soon!
HeavenLeigh xx
what a cliffy! I can't believe that she told greg he didn't flirt with her! I could never do that (unless I was pissed). I'm glad they are getting on better but I'm still worried about Katy, if tessa is right, shes gonna see Greg as hers and she's not going to like belle for stealing him. great so far! ill be back soon!
HeavenLeigh xx
3/30/2004 c2 heavenleigh5
i like the interaction between greg and belle (or sissy) but i sense some friction developing ...
I have to go, but Ill be back soon to read more
HeavenLeighxx
i like the interaction between greg and belle (or sissy) but i sense some friction developing ...
I have to go, but Ill be back soon to read more
HeavenLeighxx
3/30/2004 c1 heavenleigh5
Oh I hope Tessa doesn't think she's rich. I can tell it'll all end in tears if she does think that :( Off I go to the next chapter...
thanks for reviewing "HLM, HLMN" :D
HeavenLeigh xx
Oh I hope Tessa doesn't think she's rich. I can tell it'll all end in tears if she does think that :( Off I go to the next chapter...
thanks for reviewing "HLM, HLMN" :D
HeavenLeigh xx
3/29/2004 c15 3Haute Couture
Wow, this is a fantastic story! I, of course, have two labs to make up, two tests to study for, and all of tonight's homework- but honestly, who cares? Lol not to tell you my whole life's story or anything...I've been falling back on my reading because of school...(but at least I still have spring break to look forward to!) but I had to stop and read this whole story.
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Although it's a bit cliche, that's not necessarily a bad thing. Yes the plot is overdone, but you write it with a good perspective. I think that you could add in some more detail to just elaborate on the story.
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I actually have this same problem in my stories, so I know how hard it is to correct it: the characters are sometimes too dense. They don't see the obvious- like Isabelle. Like my people...lol. Yeah, it can get pretty annoying, in a good way- that is, the reader is involved in your story.
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I'm hoping for an update soon!
3Haute CoutureWow, this is a fantastic story! I, of course, have two labs to make up, two tests to study for, and all of tonight's homework- but honestly, who cares? Lol not to tell you my whole life's story or anything...I've been falling back on my reading because of school...(but at least I still have spring break to look forward to!) but I had to stop and read this whole story.
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Although it's a bit cliche, that's not necessarily a bad thing. Yes the plot is overdone, but you write it with a good perspective. I think that you could add in some more detail to just elaborate on the story.
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I actually have this same problem in my stories, so I know how hard it is to correct it: the characters are sometimes too dense. They don't see the obvious- like Isabelle. Like my people...lol. Yeah, it can get pretty annoying, in a good way- that is, the reader is involved in your story.
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I'm hoping for an update soon!
3/29/2004 c1 10My Works 87
So I was just reading your profile, and I thought it rather ironic that I just reviewed saying I hated the Jungle, when you LOVE it. Heh heh heh. Ain't that strange? But ah, don't hate me cause I didn't like it. Had a good message, coulda been a hundred pages shorter though. But ah, oh well. The real point of this second review is that I forgot to mention that I think you should put Greg's POV back into the story soon, cause I like that balance. But that's all my rambling. Ta-ta!
10My Works 87So I was just reading your profile, and I thought it rather ironic that I just reviewed saying I hated the Jungle, when you LOVE it. Heh heh heh. Ain't that strange? But ah, don't hate me cause I didn't like it. Had a good message, coulda been a hundred pages shorter though. But ah, oh well. The real point of this second review is that I forgot to mention that I think you should put Greg's POV back into the story soon, cause I like that balance. But that's all my rambling. Ta-ta!
3/29/2004 c15 My Works 87
Ah! He wants to stop because Katy was there, not because people could see. I'm quite sure OTHER people he wouldn't care about. Grr...I like him. But I hate him. Heh heh. Aint it great how it works? I feel so bad for Belle cause she's honestly a bit naive. I'm not quite sure whether to believe Katy or not, but something tells me that I should. He was, after all, gone for quite a long time. And he was staring at Katy. We already know that he's using Belle. But she can't see through him to other's advice. She's so smitten. And I think it's gonna hurt her, poor girl. But ah, live and learn, right? I really want to slap Greg though...even though I like him. Heh heh heh. But I honestly think he's starting to like her more than he originally planned to. LIke that deep caring, which is good. And remember, no sex before marriage. Good luck on the reading! Hear the story's dull, so I feel ya man. I had to read the Jungle! Talk about Duh-ull!
Ah! He wants to stop because Katy was there, not because people could see. I'm quite sure OTHER people he wouldn't care about. Grr...I like him. But I hate him. Heh heh. Aint it great how it works? I feel so bad for Belle cause she's honestly a bit naive. I'm not quite sure whether to believe Katy or not, but something tells me that I should. He was, after all, gone for quite a long time. And he was staring at Katy. We already know that he's using Belle. But she can't see through him to other's advice. She's so smitten. And I think it's gonna hurt her, poor girl. But ah, live and learn, right? I really want to slap Greg though...even though I like him. Heh heh heh. But I honestly think he's starting to like her more than he originally planned to. LIke that deep caring, which is good. And remember, no sex before marriage. Good luck on the reading! Hear the story's dull, so I feel ya man. I had to read the Jungle! Talk about Duh-ull!
3/29/2004 c15 Guardian of the Sea
Thank you so MUCH for writing another chapter...Ok...now write more! hehe, sorry about that, but this story is REALLY adicting
Thank you so MUCH for writing another chapter...Ok...now write more! hehe, sorry about that, but this story is REALLY adicting
3/29/2004 c15 Mackenzie Louise
I would not be the least bit surprised if he did have sex with Katy! I hate him so much! Oh, he burns me up! Anyway, this was still a nice chapter, though Sissy seems to need a reality check! Post more soon!
I would not be the least bit surprised if he did have sex with Katy! I hate him so much! Oh, he burns me up! Anyway, this was still a nice chapter, though Sissy seems to need a reality check! Post more soon!