for Patricks and Westerns1/8/2006 c25 
16rip17
i am so freaking sniffing...that's sad. i try not to be too much of a baby about those things, but everyone has to agree...THAT WAS SAD. okay, i am all better now. can't wait to read more! -stef-
16rip17i am so freaking sniffing...that's sad. i try not to be too much of a baby about those things, but everyone has to agree...THAT WAS SAD. okay, i am all better now. can't wait to read more! -stef-
12/30/2005 c25 1Dirty Secret
*Sniff* What a sad ending...but I like it :D..
A truly fantastic story, deeply moving and I look forward to reading your other stories.
1Dirty Secret*Sniff* What a sad ending...but I like it :D..
A truly fantastic story, deeply moving and I look forward to reading your other stories.
11/29/2005 c26 2JinHang
*tear* so sad... *sniff*but it was a really great story...even if it had a really sad ending. ;_;Yea, so anyways... im gonna go read some more of your stories.PS: you're on my fav. list ! ^^
2JinHang*tear* so sad... *sniff*but it was a really great story...even if it had a really sad ending. ;_;Yea, so anyways... im gonna go read some more of your stories.PS: you're on my fav. list ! ^^
10/11/2005 c26 1Icyglaze
Just read this author's note and I'll be happy to be your beta reader if you still need one. :)
1IcyglazeJust read this author's note and I'll be happy to be your beta reader if you still need one. :)
9/2/2005 c26 8Mimerz
I surprisingly really liked your ending! It makes the reader wonder what will happen next and lets them form their own opinions or solutions to if they do or would end up together in a couple years from then.
8MimerzI surprisingly really liked your ending! It makes the reader wonder what will happen next and lets them form their own opinions or solutions to if they do or would end up together in a couple years from then.
8/19/2005 c26 2Destiny Violet
Hey,Loved your story. I'm not THAT disappointed that it ended in tragedy because it was a beautiful ending. But I hope your next story'll have a gorgeous 'and they lived happily ever after' story. I'd love to be your beta reader. Hehe, I've beta'd before - basically it's editing grammatical errors in a story and a person that gives ideas on how to keep the story going or changing sentence structures, repetition, etc. I write, though it takes me FOREVER to actually get my lazy butt up to WRITE it. Hehe. Email me if you need me!-Susie
2Destiny VioletHey,Loved your story. I'm not THAT disappointed that it ended in tragedy because it was a beautiful ending. But I hope your next story'll have a gorgeous 'and they lived happily ever after' story. I'd love to be your beta reader. Hehe, I've beta'd before - basically it's editing grammatical errors in a story and a person that gives ideas on how to keep the story going or changing sentence structures, repetition, etc. I write, though it takes me FOREVER to actually get my lazy butt up to WRITE it. Hehe. Email me if you need me!-Susie
7/29/2005 c20 Shaina
MY MOUTH WILL NOT STOP HANGING OPEN! oh my god i cannot believe it! She;s 15! Hmm I wonder what her mom and Belle are gonna do.I'm still wondering about Greg's intentions. I dunno if he still want's the sex or if he really loves her. i hope its the last one. Well..im gonna go find out.Awesome story!
MY MOUTH WILL NOT STOP HANGING OPEN! oh my god i cannot believe it! She;s 15! Hmm I wonder what her mom and Belle are gonna do.I'm still wondering about Greg's intentions. I dunno if he still want's the sex or if he really loves her. i hope its the last one. Well..im gonna go find out.Awesome story!
7/11/2005 c25 3Desert Illusion
Tragic, and sad, but very good story indeed! Hope to see more of your work soon! Take care!
Bye!
-Maha.
3Desert IllusionTragic, and sad, but very good story indeed! Hope to see more of your work soon! Take care!
Bye!
-Maha.