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7/11/2005 c14 3Desert Illusion
You know, I don't think there has been anything more well said than that last line about "No sex before marriage." Kids think that their parents are too strict and just don't understand what they are going through. Oh how wrong such kids are! THEY are the immature ones who have no idea what THEY are doing, and what consequesnses they will have to put up with if they ever do make the mistake from which their parents have been stopping them all along. I really feel sorry for such kids. Whatever a parent says is always for the best of their kids. Kids are the ones who don't understand. Thumbs up to Chantal!
7/10/2005 c9 Desert Illusion
Uh oh, I sense trouble coming it's way
7/10/2005 c8 Desert Illusion
*gasps in outrage* OMG! I KNEW that he was just too good to be true! "Westerns didn't belong anywhere near Patrick's, and it was up to me to teach that impostor a lesson." That was such a mean thing to say! OMG! This is gonna be a diaster!

-Maha.
7/10/2005 c7 Desert Illusion
OMG! That was just soo good! He set up the whole thing for her! No fancy expensive restaurant! This is so much better! Greg is a sweetheart! I just hope he doesn't break her heart later on or something.

-Maha.
7/10/2005 c6 Desert Illusion
Aw! Such a sweet date!
7/10/2005 c5 Desert Illusion
Hahah! She's just IGNORING what he's saying! LOL!
7/10/2005 c4 Desert Illusion
You know, for a 'shy' girl, she is pretty blunt! LOL!
7/10/2005 c3 Desert Illusion
OMG! LOL! He didn't say anything! Greg seems like a pretty nice boy to me! Sweet!
7/10/2005 c2 Desert Illusion
Whoa, interesting thoughts of Isabelle!

-Maha.
7/10/2005 c1 Desert Illusion
You know, I personally don't like the school social classes, and it's kinda sad how these things really do effect one's life in reality. But oh well, this is life, I guess everyone has to learn how to deal with it, and fit in somehow. I hope Isabelle fits right in! She seems to be doing a good job so far.

So, I'm reading on...see ya in the reviews! Good start with the story! =)

-Maha.
6/11/2005 c26 Flora
OMGOODNESS. i just finished reading your story and it was so amazingly good. keep up the writing. also, i went on to read ur profile and i TOTALLY agree. i love the Bible ;) and i HATE the catcher in the rye. my friends always think im crazy - they love it, but ugh. :D thanks for the great read!
4/17/2005 c26 3jaz07
THAT IS SUCH A SAD ENDING WELL THATS LIKE SORT OF ANYWAY
4/16/2005 c26 LiL MeE
dude.. omg.. it pained me to read that they weren't gonna be together!.. *tear*.. but dayamn.. it wasn't good.. it wasn't great.. it was WOAH!.. like.. abso-freaken-lutely awesome!.. i would've thought that through it all, they'd end up together, whether it was him [greg] flying to paris in search for his love, or her [belle] going back to america because of her education or something.. but whatever.. it was remarkable!.. all's well that ends well..

thank you for that..
3/31/2005 c25 bitemyass
i love how you've written the story. But what i admired most was that you didn't follow the cliche way of writing the story. You made it your own, and you finished it your own. I'm glad that its not cliche (that doesn't mean i don't like cliches, i love them too) and how original it was. Good story...bravo!
12/30/2004 c26 murphy1086
Awesome story
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