for Patricks and Westerns10/31/2004 c26 
1irishgurl
WOW! This is definetly one of my favorite stories on fanpress!
Even though the ending mad me want to cry! I still feel like crying just thinking about it!
I was a really great story! You are an awsome writer!
1irishgurlWOW! This is definetly one of my favorite stories on fanpress!
Even though the ending mad me want to cry! I still feel like crying just thinking about it!
I was a really great story! You are an awsome writer!
9/21/2004 c25 starry
That was awesome!*sighs... if only Isabelle didn't have to leave. I wish they could have been together in the end (together, together i mean) but i respect your decision. Not everything ends happily ever after...
That was awesome!*sighs... if only Isabelle didn't have to leave. I wish they could have been together in the end (together, together i mean) but i respect your decision. Not everything ends happily ever after...
9/17/2004 c25 Jess
This fic seemed to have ended rather quickly. I hope there will be a short sequel for it. It is going to be interesting. (o^_^o)
This fic seemed to have ended rather quickly. I hope there will be a short sequel for it. It is going to be interesting. (o^_^o)
8/17/2004 c26 1Ophelia Rising
ah, you totally broke my heart with this story! *sniffles* it's a great ending, very bittersweet. *sighs and dabs a tissue to her eyes*
1Ophelia Risingah, you totally broke my heart with this story! *sniffles* it's a great ending, very bittersweet. *sighs and dabs a tissue to her eyes*
7/24/2004 c26 3naivete chica
OMG! You cruel person! You cud have so easily made it into a happy ending where they meet up in Paris some time later... just joking =P I respect the fact that you decided to make it a sort of tragedy instead.
That was one great story though! I'm surrounded by tissues...definitely gonna add it to my favourites list! ^^ Plz write more stories! You're so good...just make sure to not write tragedies nemore!
Btw, what happened to Greg's view of Westerns..did it stay biased and bad? Ok, one last time..that was such a touching story!
3naivete chicaOMG! You cruel person! You cud have so easily made it into a happy ending where they meet up in Paris some time later... just joking =P I respect the fact that you decided to make it a sort of tragedy instead.
That was one great story though! I'm surrounded by tissues...definitely gonna add it to my favourites list! ^^ Plz write more stories! You're so good...just make sure to not write tragedies nemore!
Btw, what happened to Greg's view of Westerns..did it stay biased and bad? Ok, one last time..that was such a touching story!
7/21/2004 c26 ItalianQT
Great story! The ending was so sad though! For your first story you did really well! : )
Great story! The ending was so sad though! For your first story you did really well! : )
7/21/2004 c25 xiaobudian
no! u can't do that! U just can't! *sobs*
There has to be a sequel to it. there just has to be. If they never meant to meet then y did they meet. It doesn't make sense. Then they shouldn't have fallen in love with each other.
It just doen't amke sense. I'm puzzled now. So is that it? They forever just are apart and both their hearts are broken? That really deosn't make sense.
There has to be something after it.
I really like your story, but the ending i really, really dissapoitning. I'm really sorry that i'm saying that, cos' i dpn't really say bad things in reviews, but could u please write a sequel or maybe u could change the ending? Hkpefully? And if sum1 did write a sequel, please tell every1.
Luv Eva
no! u can't do that! U just can't! *sobs*
There has to be a sequel to it. there just has to be. If they never meant to meet then y did they meet. It doesn't make sense. Then they shouldn't have fallen in love with each other.
It just doen't amke sense. I'm puzzled now. So is that it? They forever just are apart and both their hearts are broken? That really deosn't make sense.
There has to be something after it.
I really like your story, but the ending i really, really dissapoitning. I'm really sorry that i'm saying that, cos' i dpn't really say bad things in reviews, but could u please write a sequel or maybe u could change the ending? Hkpefully? And if sum1 did write a sequel, please tell every1.
Luv Eva
7/18/2004 c25 16kaika switched
Wow. I abosolutely loved your epilogue. It was breathtaking, seriously. Forget everyone who doesn't like the ending - things aren't always perfect. I give you props for being brave and having things turn out the way you planned. You are the author after all. But, the epilogue was seriously beautiful. I don't know what else to say. Wonderful, wonderful work! Keep writing!
16kaika switchedWow. I abosolutely loved your epilogue. It was breathtaking, seriously. Forget everyone who doesn't like the ending - things aren't always perfect. I give you props for being brave and having things turn out the way you planned. You are the author after all. But, the epilogue was seriously beautiful. I don't know what else to say. Wonderful, wonderful work! Keep writing!
7/11/2004 c1 1Icyglaze
Great story! :) The ending was so sad. :( Anyways, I'll be happy to be a beta reader for you. I haven't posted any of my stories and well, to be honest, I'm not a great writer. However, I do love criticizing work that isn't mine. I guess I'm somewhat of a perfectionist. I can help catch all the grammatical errors of your next story since I take six languages at school.
1IcyglazeGreat story! :) The ending was so sad. :( Anyways, I'll be happy to be a beta reader for you. I haven't posted any of my stories and well, to be honest, I'm not a great writer. However, I do love criticizing work that isn't mine. I guess I'm somewhat of a perfectionist. I can help catch all the grammatical errors of your next story since I take six languages at school.
7/10/2004 c11 Icyglaze
I just started reading your story and I was a little confused...are Mallory and Melanie the same person?
I just started reading your story and I was a little confused...are Mallory and Melanie the same person?
6/29/2004 c26 xTiNYDaNCERx
OMG! im so glad you finished! your story is amazing and i LOVED it! GREAT JOB!
OMG! im so glad you finished! your story is amazing and i LOVED it! GREAT JOB!
6/25/2004 c25 1kelseypaige
I am so sorry I haven't reviewed this story in so long. I lost it, and finally found it again today. I love this so much. It's wonderful. The ending was so bittersweet. Sad- yet perfect. I beleive it was the perfect ending for such a perfect story. good luck on your next pieces- I'm sure they'll be just as great.
Happy writing!
~Fallen Fantasist
1kelseypaigeI am so sorry I haven't reviewed this story in so long. I lost it, and finally found it again today. I love this so much. It's wonderful. The ending was so bittersweet. Sad- yet perfect. I beleive it was the perfect ending for such a perfect story. good luck on your next pieces- I'm sure they'll be just as great.
Happy writing!
~Fallen Fantasist
6/19/2004 c26 1Vincenza
Hey! So, when are you posting your new story? Is the couple actually wind up together? God, I hope so. I was crying so bad when I read the epilogue. Anyway, I guess I'll just have to find out for myself. Anyway, I posted chapter 13! I was so proud of myself. I hope you read. And I hope you post your story soon!
1VincenzaHey! So, when are you posting your new story? Is the couple actually wind up together? God, I hope so. I was crying so bad when I read the epilogue. Anyway, I guess I'll just have to find out for myself. Anyway, I posted chapter 13! I was so proud of myself. I hope you read. And I hope you post your story soon!