1/29/2004 c1 13Faded Soulfire
Hey Julia. I'm finally getting the chance to read your new story. And first off, I must say that I really love the title lol. How can you come up with such good ones and the ones I come up with suck? Anyway, I like the name Katherine too. Not a name you see on fiction press much. And haha. I'm already seeing the transition from your other characters to your characters now. Katherine is soo different and blunt. I mean, she's not afraid to say what she thinks and that's always a good thing. And I really like your dialogue in this story. I truly think it got better, not saying that it was bad before ... but I like it more now. Anyway, and STILL I cannot help but love how you have a way with words and details. I wish I could write decent like you. And damn, Katherine such is feisty lol.
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Ok, so unfortunately I've reached the end of the chapter and I can't wait to see how Jake's brother and the arsonist that u mentioned in your summary, all fit into this story. So I must say that I'm looking forward to reading more of your other chapters. And good luck with reviews. I'm sure this story will do very well. Well, I'm a little tired right now and I have a sore back (long story) So I'm going to work on some of my own stories and I'll talk to you later, if you come on AIM. Oh, and I hope you're having a better day today. I truly am sorry that a lot of people can be such grade a assholes and except so much out of one person. I'd tell them to fuck off next time. Can't let them get to you. I know that, from experience. Anyway, I apologize for my language today ... it just upsets me how horrible ppl are. Ok, I should be leaving now and do something else before I start talking way too much. Oh and thanks for posting lol! I missed being able to write you humongous reviews.-
Andrea

1/29/2004 c1 11DisasterousLetdown
Great start, I'm intrigued. Update soon.
~ Amy ~

1/28/2004 c1 13NehemiaH
well you asked for it...and you're getting it...a julie review...so now you get to see what a horrible friggen reviewer i am. heh so i'll try to be like YOU now and start at the beginning of the chapter and give you my thoughts on what i've just read. heh this is going to take me forever...i have too many damn aim convos going on!
Julie's Thoughts:
1. Hawaii, eh? lucky. i wish i were in hawaii. it's warm there and it's most definitely not warm here in good ol' warren, pa.
2. he's an entrepreneur. heh. we just talked about that in my FAVORITE class...ECONOMICS today! how EXCITING! :)
3. 'blasphemous amount of money'...reminds me of my AIM UN. heh sorry. i'm really random. like...you've made me want an apple just from reading this.
4. typical guy...not telling a girl he's leaving till the VERY last second. guys are true idiots...i really can't say that one enough.
5. i like how he kept saying 'i have a brother'...made him seem even MORE like a guy. heh always stating the obvious. anyway...i can't wait to meet jake's brother...jake...i like that name...MOVING ON...
6. "He was a good fuck..." heh. first of all, you made me laugh...second of all...such a simple phrase makes one see that katherine is a very blunt girl who's going to speak her mind...which makes for a good story. :) she's not gonna back down and that is a GOOD thing.
so yes. there you go...a julie review...longer than most of my reviews. i like what you've got started...furthermore, from the summary, i'm assuming that it's gonna have some crime/illegal action going on...and that makes me SO happy, because i LOVE stories like that. :) till next time...
-julie

1/28/2004 c1 2brightness-of-bloosom
^_^...it was a great chapter...Katherine is sure an independant woman...i can't wait to see how's Jake's brother is like and what will happen next...so i beg of you to continue to update as soon as possible! thank you.