for ShadowLore4/24/2004 c1 Turbo Cookie
Great, very mysterious and super discription. Justone thing: maybe you should put it in paragraphs? It makes it look very long and it's hard to read.
But still great job :)
Great, very mysterious and super discription. Justone thing: maybe you should put it in paragraphs? It makes it look very long and it's hard to read.
But still great job :)
4/24/2004 c1 turbo cookie
interesting, you might wanna use paragraphs though
interesting, you might wanna use paragraphs though
732/3/2004 c1 sakurafox 666
Yeah! That was great, but I got dizzy. plz put paragraphs and plz update soon!
Yeah! That was great, but I got dizzy. plz put paragraphs and plz update soon!