2/9/2004 c1 Winter's Roar
I like the style you chose to tell this in, brilliant. The rhyming helped it to flow for the most part, although there's no need to always rhyme. I'm not quite sure why you chose to have him be an angel, but it worked. i love you use of words, and the images you created were fantastic. An extremely well written piece!
~ winter

1/29/2004 c1 17Little Jo
Good, dark, i like it,
you should try to put it to a beat, iambic pentamiter. how ever you spell that.