for Currently Untitled But Read It Anyway10/22/2004 c7 michelle s
hey, not to bitch at you or anything, but are ever going to continue this story? cuz its on of my favs.
hey, not to bitch at you or anything, but are ever going to continue this story? cuz its on of my favs.
6/14/2004 c7 Ailis
The first three paragraphs create an atmosphere well.
Wow. I sort of thought that might be coming, but wow anyway. Character development and reactions, all good. Dramatic irony, very nice. And... not really any criticism. Except the whole suicide thing. Good writing, good job.
The first three paragraphs create an atmosphere well.
Wow. I sort of thought that might be coming, but wow anyway. Character development and reactions, all good. Dramatic irony, very nice. And... not really any criticism. Except the whole suicide thing. Good writing, good job.
5/11/2004 c1 michelle s
its me again. i was just wondering about 'the world of licia' (ur website) did you just start it? cuz its not really...well, anything. hehe, dont mind me, im just an odd little ducky!
*duckys rock*
^_^
its me again. i was just wondering about 'the world of licia' (ur website) did you just start it? cuz its not really...well, anything. hehe, dont mind me, im just an odd little ducky!
*duckys rock*
^_^
5/11/2004 c6 michelle s
wow! this is amazing! i love this story, i cant wait to see what happens next!
wow! this is amazing! i love this story, i cant wait to see what happens next!
4/30/2004 c6 your friend
evil cliff hanger...what happened? the only critizim i can offer at this point, is if maybe you made your other characters seem less like dolls and more like characters. but besides that, i love this!
evil cliff hanger...what happened? the only critizim i can offer at this point, is if maybe you made your other characters seem less like dolls and more like characters. but besides that, i love this!
4/30/2004 c6 your friend
evil cliff hanger...what happened? the only critizim i can offer at this point, is if maybe you made your other characters seem less like dolls and more like characters. but besides that, i love this!
evil cliff hanger...what happened? the only critizim i can offer at this point, is if maybe you made your other characters seem less like dolls and more like characters. but besides that, i love this!
3/26/2004 c6 
17the mouse that roared
The plot thickens...lol... it's really good writing. Update soon! (like you always update quickly, but whatever)
17the mouse that roaredThe plot thickens...lol... it's really good writing. Update soon! (like you always update quickly, but whatever)
3/19/2004 c5 Ailis
Hi
Pretty good chapter... keep writing...
Hi
Pretty good chapter... keep writing...
3/10/2004 c4 daemon
wow, such a great way to start a story! cant wait for the next update!
wow, such a great way to start a story! cant wait for the next update!
2/25/2004 c4 your friend
wow! i simply love this story. so much better then the last one, to me at least, cuz this time the characters have more...well, character! please hurry up with the next update!
wow! i simply love this story. so much better then the last one, to me at least, cuz this time the characters have more...well, character! please hurry up with the next update!
2/18/2004 c4 blade
well, the story idea is interesting, but the chapters are short and somewhat pointless. slightly stupid. but its a great idea.
well, the story idea is interesting, but the chapters are short and somewhat pointless. slightly stupid. but its a great idea.
2/18/2004 c4 Ailis
Interesting. I like it. But what the story is centered around is so depressing... And what got Marina to change her mind so quickly? Anywahy, update soon!
Interesting. I like it. But what the story is centered around is so depressing... And what got Marina to change her mind so quickly? Anywahy, update soon!
2/5/2004 c3 Ailis
Pretty good. I agree no the uselessness of counselors.
Pretty good. I agree no the uselessness of counselors.
2/5/2004 c3 Strife787
Very nice so far, every little detail seems to be so vivid... Its seems that a lot of thought without much stress over words is writing this story... almost as though it is acually happening. . . .
Very nice so far, every little detail seems to be so vivid... Its seems that a lot of thought without much stress over words is writing this story... almost as though it is acually happening. . . .
2/2/2004 c2 Ailis
This looks pretty good, but kind of sad... Keep writing though...
This looks pretty good, but kind of sad... Keep writing though...