for Bloodless2/28/2004 c1 No longer using this account
An interesting and yet as it went on gory tale with one spelling mistake I noticed, a 'her' that should be 'here'.
If I were a better review I may of had more to say but I am not so I will bring this review to an end.
Keep on writing.
An interesting and yet as it went on gory tale with one spelling mistake I noticed, a 'her' that should be 'here'.
If I were a better review I may of had more to say but I am not so I will bring this review to an end.
Keep on writing.
2/1/2004 c1 
6Kairo Paracelon
Wow, that rocked.
A few typos.
And very interesting idea of what el chupacabras looks like. Though it's kin'a demented that they named a monster "the goat-sucker".
6Kairo ParacelonWow, that rocked.
A few typos.
And very interesting idea of what el chupacabras looks like. Though it's kin'a demented that they named a monster "the goat-sucker".
1/29/2004 c1 78hiding-this-now
Wow. Thats really good. I like the irony in the ending. Very well done.
78hiding-this-nowWow. Thats really good. I like the irony in the ending. Very well done.