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9/20/2005 c1 1Soreyn
7/7/2004 c2 1Sanqhian
Yet another story that has endless options. (I see you fixed the comma/period problem) Keep writing. Even if you don't like a story you're writing it's best to finish it. 'Cause someday, you can go back and re-write it. (Something I plan to do with Flesh Wound)
6/13/2004 c2 7Samara Morgan-Ring
This is vundabar. I really really like it *stares blankly, comes back to earth* Todoshi, KEEP GOING OR FACE THE WRATH OF MY PINK FLUFFY BUNNIES OF CAPITOL LETTERS!
6/6/2004 c2 7Sarida PTV
Well, cool story but ah! What's this
(whispering breeze) underworld...underworld...
Don't get me wrong, I like this story but I still find it hard to decide, who's cooler? Vampires or Lycans?
I'm leaning towards Lycans at the moment
2/19/2004 c2 Lisrican
Yeah, i guees it has. Anyways, here's the damn review you wanted. Happy? Good. By the way, YOU MIXED UP THE NAMES! Also, what color hair does my guy have? My bad, what color hair is he ALLOWED to have. Black, plz? W/e. See ya later.
*~*~Final Spell~*~*
2/12/2004 c2 2Hisan-sa
AWESOME STORY! and yes Underworld is the one of the greatest movies i've ever seen. actually i just saw it last night... oh well great story. UPDATE SOON! happy trails *disappears*
2/11/2004 c2 5Ravage Blue
OKAY here's the longer review! dorry it was short last time. i was at school and didn't want to get caught... poor Richard... MOTORCYCLE! COOL! *dreams* *_* wow... well anyway, love it, love it, and love it. any chance i could be in it?
Maru: *WHACK* no asking that
Lycra: MARU!
Ravage: sned me the pic please! LATER!
2/9/2004 c2 ravage blue
send me all teh pics! adn don't scold me about underwolrd
OO gotta go! i'll review again... and make it longer... until tehn... LATER!
2/8/2004 c2 EvarWing
, PLZ send me some pics! Hehe, I'll review this when I'm ACTUALLY done this chap. ^.^
2/8/2004 c2 3Demon of Chaos
Firstly, I would like to say... YAY! I ACT JUST LIKE THAT! Only, I'm a bit more outgoing for a fight, but it's your story. *shoots some more ferrets* *speaks into a recorder* Day 2, the ferrets seem to be multiplying... *winks* I can't wait to see what we'll do! Mwuaahahaa... see ya!
2/3/2004 c1 EvarWing
Well done, I could instantly tell from the summary you must have watched Underworld, that's one of my fav movies. It's a good introduction, they're so hard to do. ^.^ Plz continue, I'll be waiting for more chapters.
2/3/2004 c1 fantwriter
That's sort of weird, in the last paragraph you say the girl was pinned to the wall, and then all of a sudden she's free, hoisting Richard onto her back, and running for it. The part about her tripping on the cape is sort of weird too. Like why would she get a cape that she would possibly trip on when she fights a lot, especially in such a dangerous situation.
The beginning was okay, it was a lil bit awkward, like you described what happened, but then you do the "Boom, something happens" thing...and you introduced the girlfriend, but she doesn't seem...needed...iono...
Your story is pretty cool so far, a couple spelling mistakes/grammar, and that's it. The details are good, and you seem to know where you're going. The eye changing thing is really cool! ^^ You also describe things pretty well.
2/2/2004 c1 108Kirona of the skies
WAH! How dare you end a chapter like that! Evil, I say! EVIL! *cough* erm, yes...anyhoo, very very good. I like. A lot. I want to know who the chick is, she is cool. XD Keep writing! ^_~
2/2/2004 c1 5Ravage Blue
Whoa, i love it so far. very similar to Underworld... *Thinks* AIYEE! I STILL NEED TO BUY IT! *runs around*
Maru: eh? well anyway, she did like it...
Ravage Blue
2/1/2004 c1 3Demon of Chaos
Dundundun... oh the evilness! You need to hurry and write more! Good job so far.
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