for Instead of a Calendar11/14/2012 c3 thesamehotchick
oooh, i like this!
oooh, i like this!
11/14/2012 c1 justsomehotchick
When you said 'here you suppoused to shed and wipe a teear' i did. Wipe a tear, i mean. But it was fake.
When you said 'here you suppoused to shed and wipe a teear' i did. Wipe a tear, i mean. But it was fake.
8/13/2006 c3 
1andfound815
Decent, I guess. I like the style of writing, if not all the grammar issues.The plot is there, too, at times...
I didn't like the ending, however. It should have gone on past that.
NaNoWriMo! YEAH! lol did you do it?
1andfound815Decent, I guess. I like the style of writing, if not all the grammar issues.The plot is there, too, at times...
I didn't like the ending, however. It should have gone on past that.
NaNoWriMo! YEAH! lol did you do it?
8/18/2005 c3 ren
hm. Not the best I've read, but pretty good! keep it up!
hm. Not the best I've read, but pretty good! keep it up!
8/17/2005 c3 26pneumothorax
Good ending. Continued the theme of calanders throughout. I liked the way the scene began: 'How exactly did it happen? Us kissing, I mean. I think I lost track of what exactly happened.' Gorgeous lines.
26pneumothoraxGood ending. Continued the theme of calanders throughout. I liked the way the scene began: 'How exactly did it happen? Us kissing, I mean. I think I lost track of what exactly happened.' Gorgeous lines.
8/5/2005 c2 Zeus
That was adorable. I like your style and his sister is totally evil, in a kool way. Keep it up!
-Eddy
That was adorable. I like your style and his sister is totally evil, in a kool way. Keep it up!
-Eddy
5/26/2005 c3 3Aphrael
That was absolutely cute! :D I really loved how you backpeddled at the end, starting with saying they were kissing and then going back to explain. It worked really well with the tone of the story.
The one thing I thought was a little off was you mentioning that Kate had a crush on James, and then later on in the story she was apparently trying to set them up? Struck me as a little odd, but not a big deal.
Anyway, I enjoyed that and it's going on my Favorites. :) Awesome story!
3AphraelThat was absolutely cute! :D I really loved how you backpeddled at the end, starting with saying they were kissing and then going back to explain. It worked really well with the tone of the story.
The one thing I thought was a little off was you mentioning that Kate had a crush on James, and then later on in the story she was apparently trying to set them up? Struck me as a little odd, but not a big deal.
Anyway, I enjoyed that and it's going on my Favorites. :) Awesome story!
12/27/2004 c3 Ryokofrredomofspeech
I really loved your story, it was really interesting. Kinda short, though.
I really loved your story, it was really interesting. Kinda short, though.
11/24/2004 c3 Saraswathi R
This story is absolutely lovely- very fuzzy and cute. Thanks for a great, if abrupt, read!
This story is absolutely lovely- very fuzzy and cute. Thanks for a great, if abrupt, read!