for Rise of the Dawn12/4/2021 c29 Alpharoyale
This my fourth re read of this fic over the years! I love the world that you have built and I hope you one one day come back to this fic to show us what else you had in store for Shanza, Ikeda, Kaezik and Riga!
This my fourth re read of this fic over the years! I love the world that you have built and I hope you one one day come back to this fic to show us what else you had in store for Shanza, Ikeda, Kaezik and Riga!
10/1/2021 c15 Guest
I love your story and the setting and the characters,but what I'm struggling with is that Ikedia and Shanza are the representatives of the gods,but why are they not shown the respect that goes with it? This in turn makes your story not that intresting to read
I love your story and the setting and the characters,but what I'm struggling with is that Ikedia and Shanza are the representatives of the gods,but why are they not shown the respect that goes with it? This in turn makes your story not that intresting to read
3/12/2020 c29 m
lol this is like the third time I've read this story. each time I read it, I just hope that there's a new update on at least the progress. the characters have a special place in my heart, and I would really like to know where their story ends. I also hope that you are okay and that one day you will return to conclude the final arc. :((
lol this is like the third time I've read this story. each time I read it, I just hope that there's a new update on at least the progress. the characters have a special place in my heart, and I would really like to know where their story ends. I also hope that you are okay and that one day you will return to conclude the final arc. :((
3/27/2017 c29 kellybean.19mh
Wow, I just binge-read this so quickly. Now I'm sad there's no more... Great characters! I hope that you will return to this work and we will learn the rest of their stories...
Wow, I just binge-read this so quickly. Now I'm sad there's no more... Great characters! I hope that you will return to this work and we will learn the rest of their stories...
3/23/2017 c29 Unluckynogoodshadow
Awesome chapter! Been reading this story since day 1 lol can't wait for more! Please please please update soon!
Awesome chapter! Been reading this story since day 1 lol can't wait for more! Please please please update soon!
11/2/2016 c28 Animea
I just realised I only put my last trail of thoughts on the previous comment. Sorry about that. I absolutely love your story. I like the characters, the plot, the constant change of focus on the relation between the characters. I like to see secondary plots also, otherwise it would become too focused on just the mains. It is a great story. That is why my mind kinda forgot the line of though and showed only the very ardent need for the next chapters in the first comment. Hope you'll find time to finish the story. It is really an amazing story and you have all my gratitude for sharing it with us. Hope it will also be published is worth it
I just realised I only put my last trail of thoughts on the previous comment. Sorry about that. I absolutely love your story. I like the characters, the plot, the constant change of focus on the relation between the characters. I like to see secondary plots also, otherwise it would become too focused on just the mains. It is a great story. That is why my mind kinda forgot the line of though and showed only the very ardent need for the next chapters in the first comment. Hope you'll find time to finish the story. It is really an amazing story and you have all my gratitude for sharing it with us. Hope it will also be published is worth it
11/2/2016 c29 Animea
Please, please finish the story! We cannot wait for another ten years :( This is a great story, please don't leave it unfinished like this. I hope you'll find your time and inspiration for the next chapters. Thank you
Please, please finish the story! We cannot wait for another ten years :( This is a great story, please don't leave it unfinished like this. I hope you'll find your time and inspiration for the next chapters. Thank you
10/7/2016 c29 Guest
I am so glad to see that you are back! I have re-read this story over and over for years... hoping that one day you would come back to it. Thank you!
I am so glad to see that you are back! I have re-read this story over and over for years... hoping that one day you would come back to it. Thank you!
9/20/2016 c29 Guest
I love this story! I just know riga's got some goft to make him the pheonix i just know it! I want kaezik to get better too! I feel so sad for him, for them both... But ikeda and shanza are so sweet together, they are truly a force to be reckoned with, its so cool!
I love this story! I just know riga's got some goft to make him the pheonix i just know it! I want kaezik to get better too! I feel so sad for him, for them both... But ikeda and shanza are so sweet together, they are truly a force to be reckoned with, its so cool!
9/15/2016 c29 frangipani
You know, upon rereading this chapter, it doesn't make a whole lot of sense for Dezra to not be open with Shanza about Riga. I get that you want to draw out the mystery, but the situation is pretty dire, and unless Dezra is keeping an oath, which she could just say as soon as Shanza asks, then your way of drawing this out seems like bad script writing. Like instead of 'i couldn't,' say 'I'm under oath' or something. The way it is now really detracts from her character, because remember Shanza thinks she's honorable, so he would totally understand.
On another note, I really liked how we were brought through Ikeda's emotions, that was masterfully done.
You know, upon rereading this chapter, it doesn't make a whole lot of sense for Dezra to not be open with Shanza about Riga. I get that you want to draw out the mystery, but the situation is pretty dire, and unless Dezra is keeping an oath, which she could just say as soon as Shanza asks, then your way of drawing this out seems like bad script writing. Like instead of 'i couldn't,' say 'I'm under oath' or something. The way it is now really detracts from her character, because remember Shanza thinks she's honorable, so he would totally understand.
On another note, I really liked how we were brought through Ikeda's emotions, that was masterfully done.
8/4/2016 c29 shirri
Omg! Omg! 2 new chapters! I am immensely grateful to you!
Omg! Omg! 2 new chapters! I am immensely grateful to you!
6/30/2016 c28 
5Jenimi
h.t.t.p. .c.o.m./
You are not alone, I too have read explicit content on this site I just remember it being classified as MA... I could be loosing my mind as well though. Its a shame that you have to alter your story. No worries though, I read the naughty chapter *wink*wink*
5Jenimih.t.t.p. .c.o.m./
You are not alone, I too have read explicit content on this site I just remember it being classified as MA... I could be loosing my mind as well though. Its a shame that you have to alter your story. No worries though, I read the naughty chapter *wink*wink*
6/28/2016 c29 Adrasteia Yu
Thank you for the chapter! It made my day. I share the same feelings with Ikeda. Please don't torture your characters too much :D
I'm gonna wait patiently for the next chapter.
Cheers~~
Thank you for the chapter! It made my day. I share the same feelings with Ikeda. Please don't torture your characters too much :D
I'm gonna wait patiently for the next chapter.
Cheers~~
6/27/2016 c29 Jenimi
I am so excited! wow, 10years...10years, haven't touched my own work in like forever, maybe you'll be my inspiration to go back to it.
I definitely second SnugBugs opinion, being a Dawn kind of sucks. And frankly poor Shanza seems to be getting the worst of it. But oh wow, please keep updating, I'm not trying to be a pest or too demanding but ahhhhh I wanna know this War ARC you keep mentioning in the footnotes. I apologize that I can't be of more help to the story; looking out for grammar and continuity, but frankly I'm going to be useless because I just keep getting too wrapped up in the story. My bias is far out weighing my ability to be useful. And hell I'm not that great at editing anyway. But wow, this story is a constant ride; I want more love, more action, more comedy, more CHAPTERS. Oh right I mentioned something about not being a pest. Well I will sit here some what patiently waiting for your next chapter which will be out soon, no scratch that, it will be out when you're ready. I can wait, I will wait _
I am so excited! wow, 10years...10years, haven't touched my own work in like forever, maybe you'll be my inspiration to go back to it.
I definitely second SnugBugs opinion, being a Dawn kind of sucks. And frankly poor Shanza seems to be getting the worst of it. But oh wow, please keep updating, I'm not trying to be a pest or too demanding but ahhhhh I wanna know this War ARC you keep mentioning in the footnotes. I apologize that I can't be of more help to the story; looking out for grammar and continuity, but frankly I'm going to be useless because I just keep getting too wrapped up in the story. My bias is far out weighing my ability to be useful. And hell I'm not that great at editing anyway. But wow, this story is a constant ride; I want more love, more action, more comedy, more CHAPTERS. Oh right I mentioned something about not being a pest. Well I will sit here some what patiently waiting for your next chapter which will be out soon, no scratch that, it will be out when you're ready. I can wait, I will wait _
6/26/2016 c29 CanaryChirp
I'm so excited that you're excited about the upcoming story arc. Personally, I'm thrilled to be getting more Riga-centric scenes, even though I love Ikeda and Shanza. I do wonder if we're going to see any more of Shumba and Ryunne, though.
I'm so excited that you're excited about the upcoming story arc. Personally, I'm thrilled to be getting more Riga-centric scenes, even though I love Ikeda and Shanza. I do wonder if we're going to see any more of Shumba and Ryunne, though.