for Suicide4/6/2004 c1 twinkle toes
i think this makes perfect sense...i have commented on it before...i like, very much. I think there's a mistake in this line: "He has felt some much pain that he no longer can feel" Maybe so much...just a thought
love ya floppy feet
i think this makes perfect sense...i have commented on it before...i like, very much. I think there's a mistake in this line: "He has felt some much pain that he no longer can feel" Maybe so much...just a thought
love ya floppy feet
1/30/2004 c1 lil blue song bird not logged in
WOW! Awesome job on this piece
WOW! Awesome job on this piece
1/30/2004 c1 cowsrockmyworld
mary moo-
a) this name in no way refers to the size of your waist line (congrats on the weight loss..)
b)i totally forgot i call you mary moo(another funny coincidink)
c) this poem rocks. i would have gotten it even ifyou had not entitled it suicide. very deep, very poetic. the rythym sounds okay to me, it's like a story. I Like that it doesnt rhyme (you know me...we'll leave it at that). ya, it reminds me of one you'd read in a class and the prof. would be like "class, what do you think she means..." and you know how much we hate THOSE damn discussions but ya..rocks. i like and will be copying in the front of my french notebook. love,
rubberduckie girl, sock freak, and your monopoly buddy
(one and the same, ain't that right?)
mary moo-
a) this name in no way refers to the size of your waist line (congrats on the weight loss..)
b)i totally forgot i call you mary moo(another funny coincidink)
c) this poem rocks. i would have gotten it even ifyou had not entitled it suicide. very deep, very poetic. the rythym sounds okay to me, it's like a story. I Like that it doesnt rhyme (you know me...we'll leave it at that). ya, it reminds me of one you'd read in a class and the prof. would be like "class, what do you think she means..." and you know how much we hate THOSE damn discussions but ya..rocks. i like and will be copying in the front of my french notebook. love,
rubberduckie girl, sock freak, and your monopoly buddy
(one and the same, ain't that right?)
1/30/2004 c1 
35Mime
Suicide is one of those topics where many opinions are encountered. Technically, I think your poem relates to murder more than suicide, but that doesn't make it any less intense. Great job.
35MimeSuicide is one of those topics where many opinions are encountered. Technically, I think your poem relates to murder more than suicide, but that doesn't make it any less intense. Great job.
1/30/2004 c1 25Arutha
Wow, it's sadistic and sad; I thought it was great. The world needs to wake up to writings such as this, and see that not everything is sugar-drops and plum pies. There are issues at hand, the details of which are just too much for so many to handle. You present the audacious aspect of your subject well.
25AruthaWow, it's sadistic and sad; I thought it was great. The world needs to wake up to writings such as this, and see that not everything is sugar-drops and plum pies. There are issues at hand, the details of which are just too much for so many to handle. You present the audacious aspect of your subject well.