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9/26/2006 c1 Kumquat21
You say that you didn't know what you were talking about, but this makes sense, and is quite bittersweet, quite sad. Very good job!
2/13/2004 c1 55Lellida
Aww.. so sad. This poem can also be a strong metaphor for this life. The one line that's really long doesn't really seem to fit with the poem; perhaps if you made it into 2 or something? I dunno. The ending is really powerful.
1/31/2004 c1 42Dream Angel
Ah, the cruelty that some humanity. I liked this poem a lot. Many don't even care about the death of an insect. This is a wonderful poem. I hope you continue to write. The title of this poem is excellent.
1/31/2004 c1 33shinco
That was pretty cool! You put lotsa detail in your poems! Very nice job!
1/30/2004 c1 1Mystic Dragon Queen
This is cool. I like it, but i'm probably either too young or too dumb, or maybe even too tired (it's 9:00 and i have a headache lol) to understand the concept. Oh, thanks for your review, and just so you do know, I'm not an atheist, I just wrote that cause... well cause I was depressed so ya kno,it just came to me. I just wanted to clear that up. But the poem was great, even if I couldn't understand it -_-;;

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