for Pick N Save6/17/2004 c1 
1Genius-Ben
Yeah, that WAS pretty dumb...
I think it had some potential. Although I would never encourage you to write the dialouge like in a play script. It is very hard to read it and keep up with who the characters are and what they are saying.
Keep trying.
1Genius-BenYeah, that WAS pretty dumb...
I think it had some potential. Although I would never encourage you to write the dialouge like in a play script. It is very hard to read it and keep up with who the characters are and what they are saying.
Keep trying.
2/1/2004 c1 13Ruby Maia Wexler-Granger
Rubi: Muhaha. This was spiffy!
Rabble: Spiffy... Pick N Save Pick N Save Pick N-
Rubi: *Throws a shoe at Rabble*
Rabble: x_x
Rubi: ...er... uh, sorry I kinda 'comatosed' your Assorted Rabble there. I'll pay for the aspirin, I swear. *Runs off* *Calls over shoulder* 'Twas a grand song!
13Ruby Maia Wexler-GrangerRubi: Muhaha. This was spiffy!
Rabble: Spiffy... Pick N Save Pick N Save Pick N-
Rubi: *Throws a shoe at Rabble*
Rabble: x_x
Rubi: ...er... uh, sorry I kinda 'comatosed' your Assorted Rabble there. I'll pay for the aspirin, I swear. *Runs off* *Calls over shoulder* 'Twas a grand song!
2/1/2004 c1 34Forest Passant
to answer the question in the first review, the rabble is a chorus. they answer things as a whole, and they talk amongst themselves when they're not singing.
34Forest Passantto answer the question in the first review, the rabble is a chorus. they answer things as a whole, and they talk amongst themselves when they're not singing.
2/1/2004 c1 150SpawnMeister666
Strange, weird, and extremely messed up. This is why I like your writing so much!
Spawny
150SpawnMeister666Strange, weird, and extremely messed up. This is why I like your writing so much!
Spawny
1/31/2004 c1 a.f
ok... o.0
this actually wasn't too bad, it was funny but i didn't get Rabble's character. what's up with all that mumbling? you kinda need to work on your format. it's kinda hard to follow. but other than that, your play is awesome. :)
ok... o.0
this actually wasn't too bad, it was funny but i didn't get Rabble's character. what's up with all that mumbling? you kinda need to work on your format. it's kinda hard to follow. but other than that, your play is awesome. :)