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10/19/2004 c1 23Queen Maab
I like this.
Which is strange for me, i dont like poems often or even review them. I like the rhyming pattern and the theme. And you are right it is deep but not overly exessive.
Read my stuff if you like it is nowhere as good as yours.. but... meh.
2/3/2004 c1 6Aislinn Moriarty
Oh, lovely. I like this poem, although in the beginning it was a little rocky as to the rhyme scheme. But that can be overlooked, I guess, at 1 a.m. in the morning. Keep it up.
—Aislinn
2/1/2004 c1 33M.T. Stockton
I liked it. I like thinking about that sort of thing, too. What if things hadn't happened the way they did? I didn't think it was depressing, but it was deep. We tend to take things for granted - of course that's the way it was! - when in the end any number of things could have gone wrong. I liked the rythm, and your rhyming scheme didn't seem forced, which I think the best sign of talent in a poet. Which is why I don't bother to make mine rhyme. I greatly admire those who do, though! Anyways, keep writing! :o)
2/1/2004 c1 10Mobius Soul
This thing is glitchy! I put in returns, i don't know what happened...

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