9/7/2010 c1 sweetneverinnocent
You put Illkit commited suicide, when it was the other boy. Lol sorry just wanted to help ya out!
You put Illkit commited suicide, when it was the other boy. Lol sorry just wanted to help ya out!
4/26/2009 c8 Lori
I just ran across your Ricki stories yesturday. I don't really know what to say except that I am completely enamored with this story. I normally just read m/m erotica, which is what I was looking for when I came across your stories. But I definately did not miss all of the erotica bits. The characters are just great. I love femmy men in stories and don't find them very often, so that was fun. And the angst is great. I also dont find enough angst in stories. Yeah, I can't really make an intelligent comment on the stories at this time, because I just finished up part three and am still kinda wrapped up in the whole thing. If I come up with something better, I'll drop another comment.
I just ran across your Ricki stories yesturday. I don't really know what to say except that I am completely enamored with this story. I normally just read m/m erotica, which is what I was looking for when I came across your stories. But I definately did not miss all of the erotica bits. The characters are just great. I love femmy men in stories and don't find them very often, so that was fun. And the angst is great. I also dont find enough angst in stories. Yeah, I can't really make an intelligent comment on the stories at this time, because I just finished up part three and am still kinda wrapped up in the whole thing. If I come up with something better, I'll drop another comment.
2/10/2005 c8 Bitter Berry
M. E. Ricki's confession was splendid. I'm probably going to go back and read the previous parts. Really. Gah. This has not been crap.
M. E. Ricki's confession was splendid. I'm probably going to go back and read the previous parts. Really. Gah. This has not been crap.
1/27/2005 c8 nadannuthin
I think I'm becoming addicted to your stories, DCJ. Especially this series. I liked this part better than the previous one. The last chapter was blunt, but damn near close to perfect. It was a moment that everyone wanted to hear since Illkitt came onto the scene. We all thought Ricki would follow suit with these confessions, but didn't know when. The chapter where they are in the club and Ricki saw Illkitt again and Illkitt didn't remember him...It gave me chills. I adore your characters. I draw decently, can I make this series into a doujinshi (fan comic) of sorts? Anyway, throughout the stories I tried not to feel sympathetic for Ricki's case (I guess I just love Tro, what can I say. Justice needed to be done, which I was satisfied with at the end of RBS), but I couldn't help it. And since Desty was able to see something in him, I guess I could too. Desty was probably one of my favorite characters out of the series thus far. Just...his apathy amazes me, what can I say? You have a way with words. Expect drawings in the mail.
I think I'm becoming addicted to your stories, DCJ. Especially this series. I liked this part better than the previous one. The last chapter was blunt, but damn near close to perfect. It was a moment that everyone wanted to hear since Illkitt came onto the scene. We all thought Ricki would follow suit with these confessions, but didn't know when. The chapter where they are in the club and Ricki saw Illkitt again and Illkitt didn't remember him...It gave me chills. I adore your characters. I draw decently, can I make this series into a doujinshi (fan comic) of sorts? Anyway, throughout the stories I tried not to feel sympathetic for Ricki's case (I guess I just love Tro, what can I say. Justice needed to be done, which I was satisfied with at the end of RBS), but I couldn't help it. And since Desty was able to see something in him, I guess I could too. Desty was probably one of my favorite characters out of the series thus far. Just...his apathy amazes me, what can I say? You have a way with words. Expect drawings in the mail.
1/27/2005 c1 nadannuthin
I have a good feeling about this one, but I'm gonna have to read it first. I've already fallen in love with Desty. He's a pretty cool character. He doesn't have some deep, dark secret...or DOES he? *reads on in a fervor*
I have a good feeling about this one, but I'm gonna have to read it first. I've already fallen in love with Desty. He's a pretty cool character. He doesn't have some deep, dark secret...or DOES he? *reads on in a fervor*
1/3/2005 c8 1slayerit89
Amazing! I love this part! Finally- Ricki found someone. It definitely wasn't crap and it definitely was worth doing. And continuing. I hope the next installment is coming soon!
Amazing! I love this part! Finally- Ricki found someone. It definitely wasn't crap and it definitely was worth doing. And continuing. I hope the next installment is coming soon!
12/23/2004 c8 tala
hello,I've pretty much all your serie: read Rubbing Skin Raw, Skipped through Razor Bone Shredding, and Read Bleeding Hearts Cauterised...and i must say i loved all of it...well the ones i've read. I can't wait to read the fourth installement about the couple...Good Work...i really love ur stories..they're so dark, angsty and dramatic...it's just wow ! Keep writing!
hello,I've pretty much all your serie: read Rubbing Skin Raw, Skipped through Razor Bone Shredding, and Read Bleeding Hearts Cauterised...and i must say i loved all of it...well the ones i've read. I can't wait to read the fourth installement about the couple...Good Work...i really love ur stories..they're so dark, angsty and dramatic...it's just wow ! Keep writing!
12/5/2004 c8 ddz008
Aw it was really good! XDIt was the only one of the three that ended in a happy way...And I like Desty more that Illkitt and Seritroe... Hope to see the fourth part soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Aw it was really good! XDIt was the only one of the three that ended in a happy way...And I like Desty more that Illkitt and Seritroe... Hope to see the fourth part soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
11/15/2004 c8 2Koril Dragonic
I was intrigued by the first one, hooked by the second, and reeled in by the third. I'm hoping the fourth is the catch I'm hoping it is.
I was intrigued by the first one, hooked by the second, and reeled in by the third. I'm hoping the fourth is the catch I'm hoping it is.
11/2/2004 c8 Kenny
Dude!Loved it.Forget those wankers that said it wasn't believable and what not.This is one of the few things out of lots of gay writings that I've read that get it right on point at how it is in the gay world.Take your bow bitch!You should publish this series as one book with 3 different parts to his life of coming out.I'd be the first in line gettin it signed too.
Dude!Loved it.Forget those wankers that said it wasn't believable and what not.This is one of the few things out of lots of gay writings that I've read that get it right on point at how it is in the gay world.Take your bow bitch!You should publish this series as one book with 3 different parts to his life of coming out.I'd be the first in line gettin it signed too.
10/29/2004 c7 Kittiminx
You are evil, I must say... but in a good way. You totally hooked me, I read the series all in one day and It's 5:16 am (where I am right now). It's really good you know. Keep it up and Give us something more to read and enjoy. I hope that the uni and RL including writer blocks, keep you away from typing the next chapter, hopefully, chapters... please (sad puppy eyes). Just don't give up on it. You do better with every next chapter, hope to read again more of this soon.
You are evil, I must say... but in a good way. You totally hooked me, I read the series all in one day and It's 5:16 am (where I am right now). It's really good you know. Keep it up and Give us something more to read and enjoy. I hope that the uni and RL including writer blocks, keep you away from typing the next chapter, hopefully, chapters... please (sad puppy eyes). Just don't give up on it. You do better with every next chapter, hope to read again more of this soon.
10/29/2004 c7 Kittiminx
You are evil, I must say... but in a good way. You totally hooked me, I read the series all in one day and It's 5:16 am (where I am right now). It's really good you know. Keep it up and Give us something more to read and enjoy. I hope that the uni and RL including writer blocks, keep you away from typing the next chapter, hopefully, chapters... please (sad puppy eyes). Just don't give up on it. You do better with every next chapter, hope to read again more of this soon.
You are evil, I must say... but in a good way. You totally hooked me, I read the series all in one day and It's 5:16 am (where I am right now). It's really good you know. Keep it up and Give us something more to read and enjoy. I hope that the uni and RL including writer blocks, keep you away from typing the next chapter, hopefully, chapters... please (sad puppy eyes). Just don't give up on it. You do better with every next chapter, hope to read again more of this soon.
10/26/2004 c7 Averil
Brilliant story, I'm so adding this to my favourites. I feel so sorry for Ricki! I hope that him and Desty get together, and I hope Desty isn't to upset that Ricki didn't tell him he was gay. But he does seem like the kind of guy who would understand and accept -I mean after all he went through when he found out he was gay, well I think he'd understand. So I hope everything is well between them? Please. I mean you've put us ALL through such pain with how you have made all the couples break up, please. Please! PLEASE! Be nice. I can sense you aren't a cruel person ... in saying that UPDATE! And a name for the series ... how 'bout The 'Rubbing Razor Hearts arc' or 'Rubbing Razor Hearts saga' 'Skin, bones, hearts the trilory'
Brilliant story, I'm so adding this to my favourites. I feel so sorry for Ricki! I hope that him and Desty get together, and I hope Desty isn't to upset that Ricki didn't tell him he was gay. But he does seem like the kind of guy who would understand and accept -I mean after all he went through when he found out he was gay, well I think he'd understand. So I hope everything is well between them? Please. I mean you've put us ALL through such pain with how you have made all the couples break up, please. Please! PLEASE! Be nice. I can sense you aren't a cruel person ... in saying that UPDATE! And a name for the series ... how 'bout The 'Rubbing Razor Hearts arc' or 'Rubbing Razor Hearts saga' 'Skin, bones, hearts the trilory'
10/26/2004 c7 13inarifox
i just spent two hours reading all three of these fics. it's a very good story. i live all the crap you put tro through, it good not to have a happy ending. the way you tourcher ricki is just so lovely, will he ever find some one not as mesed up as him. i hope not i love illkitt. the little masacust is so cute i could just kick him. i'm glad you didn't kill him of, the drug thing is much better. oh and i can't forget desty, love the nams by the way, all that crap he went through and he hasn't killed himself yet, i very poude. i hope they fall madly in love something therable hapends and ricki is once more going to have to find someone else to lust after. maybe he'll become a drugy with illkitt and they can live happly ever after that way, please don't do that.
your writing is very good, a few mistaces here and there but your a lot better then me and i'm trying to get a book published. the plots good, i can fallow it and there is sex in this so it rounds everything out. i know how uni can be well at least tech school, so i hope you can find the time to get the last few chaps out and the start on the blast fic, or maybe not last fic, ne? well i can only hope.
be reading when it comes out,
love fox
i just spent two hours reading all three of these fics. it's a very good story. i live all the crap you put tro through, it good not to have a happy ending. the way you tourcher ricki is just so lovely, will he ever find some one not as mesed up as him. i hope not i love illkitt. the little masacust is so cute i could just kick him. i'm glad you didn't kill him of, the drug thing is much better. oh and i can't forget desty, love the nams by the way, all that crap he went through and he hasn't killed himself yet, i very poude. i hope they fall madly in love something therable hapends and ricki is once more going to have to find someone else to lust after. maybe he'll become a drugy with illkitt and they can live happly ever after that way, please don't do that.
your writing is very good, a few mistaces here and there but your a lot better then me and i'm trying to get a book published. the plots good, i can fallow it and there is sex in this so it rounds everything out. i know how uni can be well at least tech school, so i hope you can find the time to get the last few chaps out and the start on the blast fic, or maybe not last fic, ne? well i can only hope.
be reading when it comes out,
love fox