for Sin Nomine2/25/2004 c5 
37Lilyoftheflames
O.o! Not what I expected at all! But it's still awesome...poor Scar! And what did Yugi do to the guards? Or was it the thing that was attacking her when the rain came? hhm...so many questions! hehe And THANK YOU SO MUCH for the wonderful reviews! :) makes me happy and gives me inspiration to write more! Well, I've bored you enough! Update REALLY SOON!I'll be waiting! -ko
37LilyoftheflamesO.o! Not what I expected at all! But it's still awesome...poor Scar! And what did Yugi do to the guards? Or was it the thing that was attacking her when the rain came? hhm...so many questions! hehe And THANK YOU SO MUCH for the wonderful reviews! :) makes me happy and gives me inspiration to write more! Well, I've bored you enough! Update REALLY SOON!I'll be waiting! -ko
2/22/2004 c5 mute-demon81
I like Cole!
I like Cole!
2/14/2004 c4 Lauren334
This was good! I can't wait to keep learnig about both Yugi and Scarlett's backround...Also I'm really interested in reading more of doubled edged fate, so you should update that one! okay well great job!
This was good! I can't wait to keep learnig about both Yugi and Scarlett's backround...Also I'm really interested in reading more of doubled edged fate, so you should update that one! okay well great job!
2/13/2004 c4 Lilyoftheflames
O.o OH NNO! NOT YUGI! You'll bring her back wont you? HHM You HAVE to update this story soon! ehehe I'll be waiting -ko
O.o OH NNO! NOT YUGI! You'll bring her back wont you? HHM You HAVE to update this story soon! ehehe I'll be waiting -ko
2/10/2004 c3 Lilyoftheflames
EW *for the demon dying thing* AAW:'( *for all the elves dying* AAW*for the sweet interaction between Scar and Yugi* and YAYY*for you for doing this chappie!* and PLEASEE*for you to do another one REALLY soon!* :) Well, LOVED this chappie I'll be waiting for your next one! -ko
EW *for the demon dying thing* AAW:'( *for all the elves dying* AAW*for the sweet interaction between Scar and Yugi* and YAYY*for you for doing this chappie!* and PLEASEE*for you to do another one REALLY soon!* :) Well, LOVED this chappie I'll be waiting for your next one! -ko
2/9/2004 c3 Sidious Sam
Not too bad, but I still need to read more ;)
I am, however, finding that you jump around too much, you should give a better description of each character, andthe situation that they are in. I also think that you need to work on making the story flow more easily, it tends to jump from one parragraph to the next with little to tell you if you have missed something. Over all though, not a bad effort so far. Give me more :P
Sam
Not too bad, but I still need to read more ;)
I am, however, finding that you jump around too much, you should give a better description of each character, andthe situation that they are in. I also think that you need to work on making the story flow more easily, it tends to jump from one parragraph to the next with little to tell you if you have missed something. Over all though, not a bad effort so far. Give me more :P
Sam
2/8/2004 c1 Sidious Sam
Not bad. I would say I liked it, but there isn't enough yet for me to make an opinion. Would like to read more.
Sam
Not bad. I would say I liked it, but there isn't enough yet for me to make an opinion. Would like to read more.
Sam
2/6/2004 c2 Lauren334
Oh poor Yugi...So sad whatever it was that happened to her. Scarlett as well. You have to update soon! It's a great story!
Oh poor Yugi...So sad whatever it was that happened to her. Scarlett as well. You have to update soon! It's a great story!
2/6/2004 c1 Lauren334
Wow really interesting! Wonderfully written and grabbed my attention from the start! I need to read more!
Wow really interesting! Wonderfully written and grabbed my attention from the start! I need to read more!
2/4/2004 c2 37Lilyoftheflames
O.O OMG! OH NO YUGI! Whos doing that? I wanna know! (so i can go beat him up!) and scarletts cool...she reminds me of rukie..i think that was the character's name...hehe well...update soon! I wanna know whats going on? I'll be waiting-ko
37LilyoftheflamesO.O OMG! OH NO YUGI! Whos doing that? I wanna know! (so i can go beat him up!) and scarletts cool...she reminds me of rukie..i think that was the character's name...hehe well...update soon! I wanna know whats going on? I'll be waiting-ko
2/3/2004 c1 kourtney1617
O! GOOD GOOD!hehe I want you to write more soon! I'll be waiting -ko
O! GOOD GOOD!hehe I want you to write more soon! I'll be waiting -ko
2/1/2004 c1 DarkDepression
I love the beginning of your story! Keep writing!
I love the beginning of your story! Keep writing!