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2/28/2004 c1 13evm
It's really pretty (as is everything else you write), but the 'angel of death' doesn't seem very you. I like the poem, but it does have a few akward momments(yeah, I know, don't you just love having someone who can't spell critique your poetry?). Other parts were absolutely amazing. Overall, I'd say this poem wasn't your best work, but it does have it's certain charm. The ending line was the best!
2/26/2004 c1 53Lidless Eye
Powerful and dark... the ending was good, too. Nice job!
~Lidless Eye
2/1/2004 c1 2Saranha de Angelo
Creepy, yo. But I like it. Um...nothing more helpful to say. But it's very well done (as usual!).
2/1/2004 c1 9januaryisforever
I liked the ending. ;) I hadn't realized you hadn't posted this yet. But yay for posting! Such a cool concept. La...

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