for My Sacrifice6/1/2005 c4 
7Maris. S
*Lol* Aithne a home wreaker *lmao* Anywhoo, I like where you story is going so far! I think that you should update AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! *hint hint* *lol* You know, whenever you get the chance is okies with me ^^
7Maris. S*Lol* Aithne a home wreaker *lmao* Anywhoo, I like where you story is going so far! I think that you should update AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! *hint hint* *lol* You know, whenever you get the chance is okies with me ^^
2/9/2005 c1 5Renozrai
Nice introduction. Very good description with the cold rain. I also liked the candy bar line.
5RenozraiNice introduction. Very good description with the cold rain. I also liked the candy bar line.
5/26/2004 c1 Alynxkia
There is nothing wrong with starting the same story twice and going in a new direction with it. Sometimes the result is a hundred times better. I have not read the other one yet but I'll get around to it. I like the picture you've writen so far. Too many heros were born to the part. Its nice to have some reluctant or uncertain ones.
There is nothing wrong with starting the same story twice and going in a new direction with it. Sometimes the result is a hundred times better. I have not read the other one yet but I'll get around to it. I like the picture you've writen so far. Too many heros were born to the part. Its nice to have some reluctant or uncertain ones.
2/5/2004 c3 73An Inside Joke
Good story. Funny in the right places, and as far as I can tell, it's really different from the other one.
73An Inside JokeGood story. Funny in the right places, and as far as I can tell, it's really different from the other one.
2/3/2004 c2 sakurafox 666
Wow...that's cool. I love it. You put lotsa detail in it. Good job. /_^
Wow...that's cool. I love it. You put lotsa detail in it. Good job. /_^
2/3/2004 c3 sakurafox 666
Very different, nice I like it. But I don't know which one was my fav. /_^.
Very different, nice I like it. But I don't know which one was my fav. /_^.
2/3/2004 c1 sakurafox 666
That's a good start. Keep it up! /_^
That's a good start. Keep it up! /_^