for Malady, or M'lady2/5/2005 c1 
2lirantha
I think this is my favorite of all your poems I've read so far. The last stanza is just fantastic... plastic, elastic, I'm not being sarcastic. A great twist at the end.
Thanks for reviewing!
2liranthaI think this is my favorite of all your poems I've read so far. The last stanza is just fantastic... plastic, elastic, I'm not being sarcastic. A great twist at the end.
Thanks for reviewing!
3/21/2004 c1 18Val Mora
I laughed at the last two lines, but I'm not sure I should have.
You have a real gift for rhyming. It's amazing - simply so. I love your skill with it; your grasp of poetry is more than deft.
I like it. I love it, actually, even though I'm not entirely sure I understood what you were saying.
18Val MoraI laughed at the last two lines, but I'm not sure I should have.
You have a real gift for rhyming. It's amazing - simply so. I love your skill with it; your grasp of poetry is more than deft.
I like it. I love it, actually, even though I'm not entirely sure I understood what you were saying.
2/2/2004 c1 122Hybrid-David
It's not the sort of style i'd go for but it's actually quite funny and sarcastic, good flow to the words and well thought out. It does sound as thought you spent a while thinking of the words, regardless of whether you did or not.
122Hybrid-DavidIt's not the sort of style i'd go for but it's actually quite funny and sarcastic, good flow to the words and well thought out. It does sound as thought you spent a while thinking of the words, regardless of whether you did or not.
2/2/2004 c1 123breakdown in the waiting room
This is incredible. The beat and flow was perfect for your subject. Only problems: you should have a comma between sound and the in the fourth line, and it should be plastic, not a plastic.
Loved it. Going on the faves.
-Jessica
123breakdown in the waiting roomThis is incredible. The beat and flow was perfect for your subject. Only problems: you should have a comma between sound and the in the fourth line, and it should be plastic, not a plastic.
Loved it. Going on the faves.
-Jessica