for Perfect4/2/2004 c1 
59wilderness
hey
that was really good. i dont usually read poetry, but i thought that was really a job well done!
great writing and i like how it is set up.
very emotional too, and exactly how im feeling now.
lani
59wildernesshey
that was really good. i dont usually read poetry, but i thought that was really a job well done!
great writing and i like how it is set up.
very emotional too, and exactly how im feeling now.
lani
4/2/2004 c1 78hiding-this-now
We try because we wish we could be someone in this world... And we fail we die...
Great poem. I can relate.
78hiding-this-nowWe try because we wish we could be someone in this world... And we fail we die...
Great poem. I can relate.
3/5/2004 c1 17scarred
Wow, that was really great. Good job on this one. To me it describes the relationship between a kid and thier parent, but that's just me. Keep up the great work.
17scarredWow, that was really great. Good job on this one. To me it describes the relationship between a kid and thier parent, but that's just me. Keep up the great work.
2/4/2004 c1 spazticpoetgrl
this is just..awesome. i mean totally kewl. this is the relationship my mom and i have, i dont know if its intended that way, but thats what i got. and its really great to see someone else actually realize that this is whats going on. keep writin -Spaz
this is just..awesome. i mean totally kewl. this is the relationship my mom and i have, i dont know if its intended that way, but thats what i got. and its really great to see someone else actually realize that this is whats going on. keep writin -Spaz