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2/5/2004 c1 1Lauren K
Very cute! A couple of small grammatical changes you might consider:
"True...nearly transparent" too long! Maybe make into more sentances?

Flied=flew
good though! Cute little tale...the kind (besides the bloody wing part) you could tell to the kids you baby-sit for. In fact, I think I will!
~Kiara
2/5/2004 c1 17Timberly Rey
wow. maybe i'm just emotional, but that brought tears to my eyes. That was wonderfully written. Good Job!

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