for Behind The Glass2/28/2006 c1 
14Imagined
Amazingly written. The imagery is outstanding and you feel like you could connect. Wow.
14ImaginedAmazingly written. The imagery is outstanding and you feel like you could connect. Wow.
12/14/2004 c1 53Shade
again... holy mother of wow! totally and blissfully awesome. I could sit and read that poem to myself over and over again and never get bored. I hope I am this good when I am 25. I can relate to the feelings of the person behind the glass. Please write more
~Shade
53Shadeagain... holy mother of wow! totally and blissfully awesome. I could sit and read that poem to myself over and over again and never get bored. I hope I am this good when I am 25. I can relate to the feelings of the person behind the glass. Please write more
~Shade
9/5/2004 c1 29Heather Drake
Beautiful, deep, and dark. Three of my favorite things. I love the pace of this poem. Slow and steady. Keep up the good work.
P.S. I'm not a very good poet so there's probably another word for pace. Whatever. I got my point across :)
29Heather DrakeBeautiful, deep, and dark. Three of my favorite things. I love the pace of this poem. Slow and steady. Keep up the good work.
P.S. I'm not a very good poet so there's probably another word for pace. Whatever. I got my point across :)
6/12/2004 c1 80Visions of Harmony
wow, a very moving and sad piece. I feel...what? I dont know. (I am watching DragonHeart and the dragon has just died so I'm feeling a bit sad and emotional)and so reading this piece made me feel like crying. It is so powerful, it made me want to break the glass and help you out, and yet sometimes I feel that like you, I am behind the glass, and there's no escape. I hope you find the way out!
Rozie x x x
80Visions of Harmonywow, a very moving and sad piece. I feel...what? I dont know. (I am watching DragonHeart and the dragon has just died so I'm feeling a bit sad and emotional)and so reading this piece made me feel like crying. It is so powerful, it made me want to break the glass and help you out, and yet sometimes I feel that like you, I am behind the glass, and there's no escape. I hope you find the way out!
Rozie x x x
5/21/2004 c1 20lazarusoutcast
I enjoyed this piece. It brings the reader into its emotional state, especially with the almost suffocating feel granted to the repetition of 'behind the glass.': with the countering effect of the kinetic motion of the action 'pass' followed by the stagnate action of 'glass'. Well done piece.
20lazarusoutcastI enjoyed this piece. It brings the reader into its emotional state, especially with the almost suffocating feel granted to the repetition of 'behind the glass.': with the countering effect of the kinetic motion of the action 'pass' followed by the stagnate action of 'glass'. Well done piece.
5/10/2004 c1 myno
very interesting... There's something unusual about it but I can't decide exactly what it is. Well done. The repetition of "behind the glass" leaves that phrase echoing in the reader's head, and makes you really think about the poem.
very interesting... There's something unusual about it but I can't decide exactly what it is. Well done. The repetition of "behind the glass" leaves that phrase echoing in the reader's head, and makes you really think about the poem.
5/1/2004 c1 191nine iron
I dont know about anyone who read this but somehow as I was reading I could almost see the reflections infront of me as if I was looking through glass! I felt a little trapped and cold. What a poem, the best ones have these effects on me as if I was entering the world of the subject. It seems to me that in interpretation the glass could be many things, a disability, an overprotective person, a social barrier or it could be glass. I dont know, I hope this is what you were going for when you wrote it. Well done, another masterpiece from one of the best writers of this site.
Nine Iron
191nine ironI dont know about anyone who read this but somehow as I was reading I could almost see the reflections infront of me as if I was looking through glass! I felt a little trapped and cold. What a poem, the best ones have these effects on me as if I was entering the world of the subject. It seems to me that in interpretation the glass could be many things, a disability, an overprotective person, a social barrier or it could be glass. I dont know, I hope this is what you were going for when you wrote it. Well done, another masterpiece from one of the best writers of this site.
Nine Iron
4/20/2004 c1 falconstrife86
Another beautifully written poem. ^_^ And I can see where this would apply in life. So metaphorical. Great work! ^_^
Another beautifully written poem. ^_^ And I can see where this would apply in life. So metaphorical. Great work! ^_^
4/17/2004 c1 WakeRobin
I like the feeling of this. It really captures so much emotion and I can really relate to it a lot sometimes. I think you have the talent, not I.
I like the feeling of this. It really captures so much emotion and I can really relate to it a lot sometimes. I think you have the talent, not I.
4/16/2004 c1 64Bound Whisper
Very descriptive which I like. It just makes me want to break that glass for you. Nice piece.
64Bound WhisperVery descriptive which I like. It just makes me want to break that glass for you. Nice piece.
4/1/2004 c1 30Roadside Dryer
Good! I liked the last para the most. I saw you like Linkin Park (yes I'm one of those strange people who actually reads bios) do you play the violin, i do. Anyway back to the poem I liked it a lot, the thrid para from the end was really good to.
30Roadside DryerGood! I liked the last para the most. I saw you like Linkin Park (yes I'm one of those strange people who actually reads bios) do you play the violin, i do. Anyway back to the poem I liked it a lot, the thrid para from the end was really good to.
3/24/2004 c1 51A Girl in Denial
Wow this is pretty, in a dark way. Another idea for you (take it if you wish): If you seperated "behind the glass" to make a new line at the end of each stanza, I think it will grip the reader more. At least it would grip me.
I was informed by Seeker that it was your birthday two days ago. I didn't know and I'm really sorry! So have a great (belated) birthday! Hope it was as great for you as mine was for me!
agid
51A Girl in DenialWow this is pretty, in a dark way. Another idea for you (take it if you wish): If you seperated "behind the glass" to make a new line at the end of each stanza, I think it will grip the reader more. At least it would grip me.
I was informed by Seeker that it was your birthday two days ago. I didn't know and I'm really sorry! So have a great (belated) birthday! Hope it was as great for you as mine was for me!
agid