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2/12/2004 c1 8InsaneOleander
This story is pretty good so far... The only thing is that there seems to be a lot of stuff going on in just the first chappy... So I think that you should slow the whole thing down a bit... I mean a guy wouldn't just invite her on stage like that would he? And she falls for him so fast...so...umm...ok..bye bye..
2/11/2004 c3 kristina toffland
YAY! Jake and Evie are starting over! great, i knew Jake was going to show up because he does sound like a nice guy and so you keep up the good work and update okay! and please come check out "living with trey duvall," and you've got a devoted reader in me
o.k so you have a devoted reader in me anyway! lol
Kris
2/11/2004 c3 6Onion Ring
Hmm interesting. The description needs some work but the dialogue is fine. The grammar also needs some work. Evie seems to be very conceited and a bitch, but everyone says my characters are the same exact way, except they are known for it. Well I don't find it really realistic that she'd suddenly have some revelation without something happening to hear it since i dont think Jake would have been the first guy to call her a bitch. Anyway, it's good so far. Keep writing. Can you also review my fics? Thanks
2/8/2004 c2 3Jenn-chan aka KristinaToffland
yeah! you updated but now you must update again! keep up the good work! looking forward to more!
Kris
2/6/2004 c1 Cheese and DG
good story! update soon!
2/6/2004 c1 5Punk'd
Wow...I'm dying to see where this is going!
Its really good...please please please update soon!
2/5/2004 c1 kristina toffland
wow! that was quick and so good! please update this soon! and come by and review my fic if not for anythign but to tell me you updated!
keep up the good work!
Kris

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