5/14/2005 c1 112suey and liuey
bittersweet, and cleverly written.you have a lovely style.
keep it up.
bittersweet, and cleverly written.you have a lovely style.
keep it up.
2/14/2004 c1 A-Moon-On-My-Wings
wow that is SO well writen! It made my heart race and my eyes water. WELL DONE! *applause*
wow that is SO well writen! It made my heart race and my eyes water. WELL DONE! *applause*
2/12/2004 c1 26esotericblood
Great poem, I love the vocabulary. Very vivid, too. Thanks for the reviews, too! :)
Great poem, I love the vocabulary. Very vivid, too. Thanks for the reviews, too! :)
2/9/2004 c1 11CoyDelirious
I loved this poem. (After you reviewed my own I decided to come and check out your work) The wording is fantastic, descriptive and vivid, very dark. Dark poetry is my favourite kind. It's so good I could read it over and over. Nice, very nice.
I loved this poem. (After you reviewed my own I decided to come and check out your work) The wording is fantastic, descriptive and vivid, very dark. Dark poetry is my favourite kind. It's so good I could read it over and over. Nice, very nice.