
2/29/2004 c1
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So sorrowful, though I liked it. The phrase 'rose painted black' caught me, and is a great metaphor for the situation. keep writing. ^^

So sorrowful, though I liked it. The phrase 'rose painted black' caught me, and is a great metaphor for the situation. keep writing. ^^
2/13/2004 c1 Nick
Interesting, interesting showing of how your feelings for someone can be very strong at one point and also wear away very quickly. I like the last line, "I'm painting our rose black.", kind of like youre saying this event was not an accident, That sometimes we have to make decisions that hurt ourselves and other people but theyre decisions we must make.
Interesting, interesting showing of how your feelings for someone can be very strong at one point and also wear away very quickly. I like the last line, "I'm painting our rose black.", kind of like youre saying this event was not an accident, That sometimes we have to make decisions that hurt ourselves and other people but theyre decisions we must make.