for The Stream2/28/2005 c1 
12SkyeWolf25
Beautiful poem! This actually really relates to me, I photograph a bunch of streams and rivers, and god, I hadn't ever really thought about them that way and maybe thats the appeal of the poem. Its a different thought, its unique and very well done. Only one line I noticed "Flowing where some wants" kinda did fit for some reason. You may want to check on it. Still, thank you for your review on Tid Bits.
12SkyeWolf25Beautiful poem! This actually really relates to me, I photograph a bunch of streams and rivers, and god, I hadn't ever really thought about them that way and maybe thats the appeal of the poem. Its a different thought, its unique and very well done. Only one line I noticed "Flowing where some wants" kinda did fit for some reason. You may want to check on it. Still, thank you for your review on Tid Bits.
5/28/2004 c1 5aiur
poetic way of thinking of it! nice poetry here ... eh ... i'm no good with reviewing poetry so this is like the best i can do. it was a good topic, and well written. keep up the good work
~k8
5aiurpoetic way of thinking of it! nice poetry here ... eh ... i'm no good with reviewing poetry so this is like the best i can do. it was a good topic, and well written. keep up the good work
~k8
5/12/2004 c1 82pippin tomson
This is a very retorical towards the end form my point of view, but I liked the way you answered it. I ,iked the way the choices had resented themseleves, but it is what is done with them that makes you you. It's a very allround poem and I really enjoyed reading this.
pippin
p.s. I shoulda been on here more often
82pippin tomsonThis is a very retorical towards the end form my point of view, but I liked the way you answered it. I ,iked the way the choices had resented themseleves, but it is what is done with them that makes you you. It's a very allround poem and I really enjoyed reading this.
pippin
p.s. I shoulda been on here more often
2/13/2004 c1 8KawaiiCookie
That's absolutly beautiful. So much metaphor. Great work!
Also, this is going in my favorites. Go you!
8KawaiiCookieThat's absolutly beautiful. So much metaphor. Great work!
Also, this is going in my favorites. Go you!
2/7/2004 c1 148JJR Meerraf
Wow! I'm actually review on time! :)
I LOVED this poem! It was really cool! Very cool imagery as well! Wonderful work!
148JJR MeerrafWow! I'm actually review on time! :)
I LOVED this poem! It was really cool! Very cool imagery as well! Wonderful work!