
2/7/2004 c1 fish-scales
hm, well you got it. you write smoothly, execpt for a few bumbs in the road you got it down. continue writing and you're sure to improve. good write.
hm, well you got it. you write smoothly, execpt for a few bumbs in the road you got it down. continue writing and you're sure to improve. good write.
2/7/2004 c1
4Amethyst Fire Knight
This is really great! I think about this all the time, and you really wrote it well. I see people, and myself trying to fit in all the time, and you put it in excellent words. Keep writing!
~*Amethyst Fire Knight*~
ps- Go Ballerinas! (I'm one myself)

This is really great! I think about this all the time, and you really wrote it well. I see people, and myself trying to fit in all the time, and you put it in excellent words. Keep writing!
~*Amethyst Fire Knight*~
ps- Go Ballerinas! (I'm one myself)