for Wait For Me2/25/2004 c1 
43reiphil
Good poem... Flows really well, but the only problem i have is that the end stands out too much. If you were goign to use a cesura, or something of the sort, you should try to put it somewhere i the middle of the poem instead of right at the end. Good poem none the less ^_^. and also, if you want to read more of my stuff... it is there on my FP.
43reiphilGood poem... Flows really well, but the only problem i have is that the end stands out too much. If you were goign to use a cesura, or something of the sort, you should try to put it somewhere i the middle of the poem instead of right at the end. Good poem none the less ^_^. and also, if you want to read more of my stuff... it is there on my FP.
2/11/2004 c1 4angel-essence
Aww...=) I feel so much like this about this guy I love. Yes, love, not like. Even though he doesn't feel the same about me. I wish he'd wait up...but I think I need to wait for him sometimes too =). Just wait around...if he's right for you...he'll be back =D. And if not, hey, there's always more fish in the sea!
4angel-essenceAww...=) I feel so much like this about this guy I love. Yes, love, not like. Even though he doesn't feel the same about me. I wish he'd wait up...but I think I need to wait for him sometimes too =). Just wait around...if he's right for you...he'll be back =D. And if not, hey, there's always more fish in the sea!