for Night and Day5/27/2005 c1 
26pneumothorax
Some simple lines like: "People are hassling me and bothering me." which detracted from the overall effect perhaps, but did work to express how you felt. Anyway, not bad :)
26pneumothoraxSome simple lines like: "People are hassling me and bothering me." which detracted from the overall effect perhaps, but did work to express how you felt. Anyway, not bad :)
2/21/2004 c1 47Kenishiro
i kind of agree with you on that, but i'm one of those people who likes to interact with others and i kind of disagree on you that daytime brings only sadness, though my daytime are always hectic. anyway still your poem represent your life and it is good, keep up the good work...
47Kenishiroi kind of agree with you on that, but i'm one of those people who likes to interact with others and i kind of disagree on you that daytime brings only sadness, though my daytime are always hectic. anyway still your poem represent your life and it is good, keep up the good work...