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6/14/2004 c1 55APersonAndAHalf
This is good, and weird, because I was just listening to this song on the radio called "Perpetual Motion" and this reminded me of it.
3/4/2004 c1 3Adriana DiVolpe
I really loved this. I like the word choices; it helps express the sad moodiness of the poem. I like the last stanza the best; I've never thought about it but that's so true.
2/20/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
maybe i'm just being melodramatic,
but pain makes good poetry,
but who needs good poetry
if pain is the price?
I love that part. Very true. Poets have a tendancy to be melodramatic, but hey...that is the soul of the poet. Well done.
2/15/2004 c1 redsockperson
?_? i m confused (wich bi the way is wat i do 4 24 hours) but that was awesome it sounds nothin like my life bcause i dont no those feelings
2/13/2004 c1 3CalistaRaine
HAILEN! haha
I love this poem, you have real talent as a writer. good job and keep it up.

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