
4/19/2006 c2
13Trey Terror
oo I like it soo far. I like the format. But u have a spelling deal,at the end of the first paragraph... um is says "davis" lol not "david" but other than that, Kudos.
~Shadowssong
ps: thanks for ur comment on me story, please keep up to date(if u liked it). And update this when u get the chance id like to see it go somewhere.

oo I like it soo far. I like the format. But u have a spelling deal,at the end of the first paragraph... um is says "davis" lol not "david" but other than that, Kudos.
~Shadowssong
ps: thanks for ur comment on me story, please keep up to date(if u liked it). And update this when u get the chance id like to see it go somewhere.