for The Wrong Way5/23/2004 c1 
53Shayndel
Nice imagery, and the style is interesting *like a short passage from a story, but more poetic* Turning to walk the wrong way... the concept's unique.
53ShayndelNice imagery, and the style is interesting *like a short passage from a story, but more poetic* Turning to walk the wrong way... the concept's unique.
5/18/2004 c1 bluberfish
really good. a great style. reminds me of the road less taken. good.
really good. a great style. reminds me of the road less taken. good.
4/14/2004 c1 57tofujunky
This piece left me with same awe I felt after reading Robert Frost's "The Road Less Taken." Beautifully written - incredible imagery and emotionally effective.
57tofujunkyThis piece left me with same awe I felt after reading Robert Frost's "The Road Less Taken." Beautifully written - incredible imagery and emotionally effective.
4/11/2004 c1 Writer of Darkness
Great poem. Don't stop writing this way.
Great poem. Don't stop writing this way.
2/14/2004 c1 your hommie
i can review this one! i swear to God ive had this dream before. beautifully written by a beautiful writer. colorful and not so descriptive that i wanted to choke the writer to get on w/the point. i love it
i can review this one! i swear to God ive had this dream before. beautifully written by a beautiful writer. colorful and not so descriptive that i wanted to choke the writer to get on w/the point. i love it