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6/4/2004 c1 22MagenDavid
After I read this I nearly fell of my chair! Not only is it EXETREMLY well written, but these are things I think about!
*starts singing "I'm Not Alone"*
2/13/2004 c1 37Sunflower Philosophy
Very cool poem. I mean, the poem was beautiful and the wordplay was cool- "unanswered question" and "questionable answer", that was awesome. I love the questions you raise here- about the rectangle and green and the poem... and I especially love the conclusion.
The "she" and "he" in "Dancing" aren't, uh, what's the word- metonomous? You know, sort of symbollic pieces of a whole? Okay I'll speak English- they don't stand for all women or all men or something. I used a "he" and "she" because using two "he"s or "she"s would be rather confusing... I used two characters to compare the different attitudes. You can sort of see which one I like better. :)
Glad to see you back here... I've been sort of off for a while. You start to get sick of the same old ornery angsty poetry, you know...?
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
2/12/2004 c1 120Heather Montgomery
Wow. Very beautiful poem. I love the style, and the idea... it's really good. Great job!

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