for Purge2/19/2006 c1 
6Strider Hunter
Quite a unique horror story. Your writing is very descriptive, with lots of info provided for the reader's senses. "I know that the door leads to a place that I don't wish to go" was good line.
I wonder had you not woken up from this nightmare, what evils were about to befall the protagonist. Keep up the good work!
6Strider HunterQuite a unique horror story. Your writing is very descriptive, with lots of info provided for the reader's senses. "I know that the door leads to a place that I don't wish to go" was good line.
I wonder had you not woken up from this nightmare, what evils were about to befall the protagonist. Keep up the good work!
2/8/2006 c1 1zombiedog001
Did you say this was a dream? Man, I'd be scared too if I woke up from that. Anyways, that was a great chapter. I love the way you caught everything. And the details were awesome.
1zombiedog001Did you say this was a dream? Man, I'd be scared too if I woke up from that. Anyways, that was a great chapter. I love the way you caught everything. And the details were awesome.
11/19/2005 c1 satan'schild
Okay... um that was ...interesting. Not scary at all. Sounds like a really scary dream.I had worst dreams than that. Good but not at all scary. Ill be waiting 4 someting scary any day now. Good luck with this
Okay... um that was ...interesting. Not scary at all. Sounds like a really scary dream.I had worst dreams than that. Good but not at all scary. Ill be waiting 4 someting scary any day now. Good luck with this
9/18/2005 c1 4Lonely-people
So detailed, i love it, i really want to know what happens. but what is really creepy is that i have had a dream simmilar...
4Lonely-peopleSo detailed, i love it, i really want to know what happens. but what is really creepy is that i have had a dream simmilar...
7/23/2005 c1 adarkflame
Very suspenseful. And very good I might add. I’m really interested in knowing what happens…
Very suspenseful. And very good I might add. I’m really interested in knowing what happens…
7/17/2005 c1 zakei
not horrifying, not sadistic, but a tinge creepy. can be described as say.. worrying. nice anyway. better than the average story.
not horrifying, not sadistic, but a tinge creepy. can be described as say.. worrying. nice anyway. better than the average story.
1/5/2005 c1 6Luckie
Ahh.. Isn't it wonderful when inspiration comes from your dreams? Very intense story though, and wonderful description. I'm glad you decided to turn your dream into a story. Thanks for sharing!
6LuckieAhh.. Isn't it wonderful when inspiration comes from your dreams? Very intense story though, and wonderful description. I'm glad you decided to turn your dream into a story. Thanks for sharing!
10/19/2004 c1 21Lonely Cupid
This piece is a well-written hell-of-a-nightmare. You just gave me an idea, I should've wriiten my scary nightmares too... that'll be interesting... Excellent! :)
P.S. Oh yeah, please read and review my piece too, An Untitled Piece of Eternal Love. Thank you very much! Why don't we become friends? :)
21Lonely CupidThis piece is a well-written hell-of-a-nightmare. You just gave me an idea, I should've wriiten my scary nightmares too... that'll be interesting... Excellent! :)
P.S. Oh yeah, please read and review my piece too, An Untitled Piece of Eternal Love. Thank you very much! Why don't we become friends? :)
8/9/2004 c1 CitizenofBalance
I do the same when I write my dreams down, I write it a little too observative, because that's all you have remembering the dreams: observations. This was a little bit of a problem here. Dreams are abstract things, therefore people should use abstract storytelling to convey them. I dug this story, but I could have "felt" it a little more, if you know what I'm saying.
-C of D
I do the same when I write my dreams down, I write it a little too observative, because that's all you have remembering the dreams: observations. This was a little bit of a problem here. Dreams are abstract things, therefore people should use abstract storytelling to convey them. I dug this story, but I could have "felt" it a little more, if you know what I'm saying.
-C of D
7/5/2004 c1 Purple Mice
Sounds interesting. good start. update soon.
Sounds interesting. good start. update soon.
3/29/2004 c1 fayreweill
marvellous writing! i enjoyed the imagery a lot. keep writing! nice prose there :)
marvellous writing! i enjoyed the imagery a lot. keep writing! nice prose there :)
2/18/2004 c1 7Lightness
amazing descriptions. this was so very realistic. youve done a wonderful job. i dont really have anything to complain about (thats a pretty big deal... i get very picky).
anyway. do continue. tell then, bye. have fun, kid. :).
7Lightnessamazing descriptions. this was so very realistic. youve done a wonderful job. i dont really have anything to complain about (thats a pretty big deal... i get very picky).
anyway. do continue. tell then, bye. have fun, kid. :).
2/13/2004 c1 Ruairidh
Hey, it's really good so far! Very descriptive. You can really see what the character sees and feel what the character feels. I'd like to read more! And thanks for the review by the way :) keep up the good work. . .
Hey, it's really good so far! Very descriptive. You can really see what the character sees and feel what the character feels. I'd like to read more! And thanks for the review by the way :) keep up the good work. . .