for Journies of Sarcasm9/10/2005 c1 
1Clodhopper
heh, this was very enjoyable. I imagine it would be very hard to run with an arrow in your back, that seems a bit unrealistic, but heck it's a fantasy right? I liked the note about BBQing any Goblin after it was over, that was quite funny. If I was to give you some CC I would say to put more details involving the 5 senses in, if that makes sense
Mack
1Clodhopperheh, this was very enjoyable. I imagine it would be very hard to run with an arrow in your back, that seems a bit unrealistic, but heck it's a fantasy right? I liked the note about BBQing any Goblin after it was over, that was quite funny. If I was to give you some CC I would say to put more details involving the 5 senses in, if that makes sense
Mack
9/10/2005 c2 1The Ranting Fool
I have to say that quite a lot of my friends sadly like pink unicorns and may take offence about crulty to them... :P
I liked the start of this and will have to finish it later:)
1The Ranting FoolI have to say that quite a lot of my friends sadly like pink unicorns and may take offence about crulty to them... :P
I liked the start of this and will have to finish it later:)
9/9/2005 c12 CloverTea
Okay, you've thoroughly hooked me so you better hurry up and get the next chapter posted. Gah! I want to know what happens now. Oh well, I'm willing to wait...for the mean time.
Okay, you've thoroughly hooked me so you better hurry up and get the next chapter posted. Gah! I want to know what happens now. Oh well, I'm willing to wait...for the mean time.
9/9/2005 c12 Mychael Lynne
YES! ANOTHER UPDATE! YOU ROCK! -huggles- This story is SO funny! Update son!
~Lightning Princess
YES! ANOTHER UPDATE! YOU ROCK! -huggles- This story is SO funny! Update son!
~Lightning Princess
9/9/2005 c12 4RurouniMarion
...YOU! YOU TOOK SO LONG TO UPDATE, I HAD TO READ THE WHOLE FRICKIN STORY OVER AGAIN, CAUSE I HAD FORGOTTEN WHAT HAPPENED! -seethes-
So UPDATE, curse you! [Hahaha, but that was really funny, I liked that ^^ Good job!]
4RurouniMarion...YOU! YOU TOOK SO LONG TO UPDATE, I HAD TO READ THE WHOLE FRICKIN STORY OVER AGAIN, CAUSE I HAD FORGOTTEN WHAT HAPPENED! -seethes-
So UPDATE, curse you! [Hahaha, but that was really funny, I liked that ^^ Good job!]
9/9/2005 c12 10mute-demon81
Ah! I loved it! I even re-read the last chapter just to make sure I remembered what was going on, and I still loved the last chapter! Highly amusing, and getting a little more in depth with Rukie's past. I like this, its a bit fresher, and adds freshness to the kitchen left overs ^.~
10mute-demon81Ah! I loved it! I even re-read the last chapter just to make sure I remembered what was going on, and I still loved the last chapter! Highly amusing, and getting a little more in depth with Rukie's past. I like this, its a bit fresher, and adds freshness to the kitchen left overs ^.~
9/8/2005 c11 133Dying Rose
This is the most awesome, hilarious story ever! You have to finish it! Update, please! I love it! :D
133Dying RoseThis is the most awesome, hilarious story ever! You have to finish it! Update, please! I love it! :D
8/8/2005 c11 mystic raindrop
please update or i might have to hurt my little brother
please update or i might have to hurt my little brother
4/11/2005 c1 3myspleen
lol arrow. hehe. sorry im morbid right now. lol. anyway good job. i love discovering new stories
3myspleenlol arrow. hehe. sorry im morbid right now. lol. anyway good job. i love discovering new stories
4/10/2005 c11 The Edward
DUDE!...o_o when are you going to update?
DUDE!...o_o when are you going to update?
3/12/2005 c1 13Eyes Unclouded
First off, thanks for the review! Sorry it took so long to return the favor ^_^;
I love the elf's sarcasm and how the story is from her point of view. I also liked the last line, "I'm a big girl now..." Very cool. My only criticism is to watch your punctuation and use spellcheck (for example, stumbled is misspelled as "stummbled" and "prolouge" is actually spelled "prologue").
Good work!^_^
13Eyes UncloudedFirst off, thanks for the review! Sorry it took so long to return the favor ^_^;
I love the elf's sarcasm and how the story is from her point of view. I also liked the last line, "I'm a big girl now..." Very cool. My only criticism is to watch your punctuation and use spellcheck (for example, stumbled is misspelled as "stummbled" and "prolouge" is actually spelled "prologue").
Good work!^_^
3/3/2005 c11 37Lilyoftheflames
HEY! Sorry it's been forever since I last reviewed anything *sigh* I have been UBER busy with a million things..well enough complaining on my part hehe! You brought a new character! Cool and the height inferiority is funny! I mean I'm at least 5 feet 4 and all of the freshmen girl at my high school are like 5 feet 6 or 7 and I'm 2 years older than them! It's horrible! lol Well, its really cool that you are trying to get this story published I wish you the best of luck! *and I'm Irish ;)* So good luck with that and update soon! ~lilyoftheflames
37LilyoftheflamesHEY! Sorry it's been forever since I last reviewed anything *sigh* I have been UBER busy with a million things..well enough complaining on my part hehe! You brought a new character! Cool and the height inferiority is funny! I mean I'm at least 5 feet 4 and all of the freshmen girl at my high school are like 5 feet 6 or 7 and I'm 2 years older than them! It's horrible! lol Well, its really cool that you are trying to get this story published I wish you the best of luck! *and I'm Irish ;)* So good luck with that and update soon! ~lilyoftheflames
2/12/2005 c11 2Peeka-chan
Oh, poor Rukie! I do believe there is such a thing as even worse bad luck! MUFFINS FOR ALL! This is really good, don't worry us reviewers won't hurt you. School is evil! But please update soon!
Peeka-chan
2Peeka-chanOh, poor Rukie! I do believe there is such a thing as even worse bad luck! MUFFINS FOR ALL! This is really good, don't worry us reviewers won't hurt you. School is evil! But please update soon!
Peeka-chan
2/6/2005 c11 Mychael Lynne
WHOOT! YAY! u updated! *dances around in cirlces happily* hehe! this was a good chappy! ^^ hehehe i like the twig and headless chicken. ^^ DIE PINK UNICORNS! DIE! *goes around killing random pink unicorns* hehehe...yeah...i'm in a weird mood...UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
~~Lightning Princess
WHOOT! YAY! u updated! *dances around in cirlces happily* hehe! this was a good chappy! ^^ hehehe i like the twig and headless chicken. ^^ DIE PINK UNICORNS! DIE! *goes around killing random pink unicorns* hehehe...yeah...i'm in a weird mood...UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
~~Lightning Princess