
4/30/2021 c1 TURNER35
Awesome story you got here! I like how the plot is going. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
Awesome story you got here! I like how the plot is going. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
2/13/2004 c1
4AAGoddess-of-the-Ocean
Awesome! :D
Maybe you'd want to make the paragraphs seperated a bit though, because for some weird reason it will make it more absorbing. The way it looks right now kind of makes your eyes hurt and so yah... :D lol
But the story is GREAT !omg i can't beleive u think it's nothing special. u should make more chapters about Freddy. it'd be awesome:)
**Me**

Awesome! :D
Maybe you'd want to make the paragraphs seperated a bit though, because for some weird reason it will make it more absorbing. The way it looks right now kind of makes your eyes hurt and so yah... :D lol
But the story is GREAT !omg i can't beleive u think it's nothing special. u should make more chapters about Freddy. it'd be awesome:)
**Me**