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11/22/2005 c1 20Gaxor
Hey, that was a nice twist, being in an insane asylum! I would say that grammar is something you might want to improve on, and maybe grouping sentences in intricate ways, but heck, you're on the right track - keep writing!-by the way, I hate flamers too... they have no purpose in here...
3/20/2005 c1 19Brightstarr-Bella
Hi, me again! This was interesting, I understand the point you're getting at it. I agree with the third reviewer, ignore the flamers. Just keep trying your best and that's all that matters! Once more, you might want to do a spell check. Keep writing!

*Bella*
12/4/2002 c1 26pneumothorax
This was good, I would say keep it going but I guess you can't really with this. hmm. i am the only person that got this? (*glares at the second reviwer evilly*)

Cali.
4/24/2000 c1 figuresk8ter
Well that was boring...or...um...*Trying to be nice* interesting. What was that about anyways? Who cares really? Well my point is, that sucked.
4/11/2000 c1 Jonathan Urban
Interesting.

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