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12/28/2004 c1 41Sat Hari
Great job! I love it!
4/8/2004 c1 17OryssaV
I think it would have have more effect if it weren't you speaking in that poem. Maybe if you would say that (in a tilte) "butterly's burden" or something so that we wouldn't expect a human speaker- it would make it much more poetic. Because it is "jsut a thought" what you wrote. But a nice thought on other side.
3/16/2004 c1 fayreweill
excellently written! *claps hands*
2/14/2004 c1 2Sheila Ibre
Did you try using a different style at the beginning? It's a good job well done. I think you should try to be consistant with it though; you continued in your well known aode-ish fashion again! :)
Keep it up! It's been long since I've heard from you. I hope everything's fine over there.

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