for Romantic Medley6/28/2004 c1 Melancholy Butterfly
First off, let me applaud you for your wonderful word choice. Each line of the haiku portrays a very intriguing persepctive of love, and the haiku simply conveys a great sense love and yet also conflict. "Hispid embraces", a most interesting line, the word "hispid" I have never heard of until redaing this haiku :)
First off, let me applaud you for your wonderful word choice. Each line of the haiku portrays a very intriguing persepctive of love, and the haiku simply conveys a great sense love and yet also conflict. "Hispid embraces", a most interesting line, the word "hispid" I have never heard of until redaing this haiku :)
6/15/2004 c1 
96Mitsunaga
very clashing conflict and such makes me all ambivilant inside. Adherant to the saying "Good art poses questions"
96Mitsunagavery clashing conflict and such makes me all ambivilant inside. Adherant to the saying "Good art poses questions"
4/10/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
Nifty words, haven't seen a well done haiku for a while. Hehe. Good work!
Jenna xx
119AntiPleasureNifty words, haven't seen a well done haiku for a while. Hehe. Good work!
Jenna xx
3/17/2004 c1 123breakdown in the waiting room
"Hypcrite and caregiving."
Like my parents.
"Empathy fever." Such awesome lines!
-Jessica
123breakdown in the waiting room"Hypcrite and caregiving."
Like my parents.
"Empathy fever." Such awesome lines!
-Jessica
3/4/2004 c1 26kamikaze899
write more! i love the wordiness... and i totally agree with this.. keep writing! ^_^
26kamikaze899write more! i love the wordiness... and i totally agree with this.. keep writing! ^_^
2/16/2004 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
mm you my dear are amazing. ahh you need to write more of these. doule entendres and whatnot. which is really clever due to the subject. last line is perfection perfected...sorry for lack of sense-making?
~lyv
127godawful teen-angst poetrymm you my dear are amazing. ahh you need to write more of these. doule entendres and whatnot. which is really clever due to the subject. last line is perfection perfected...sorry for lack of sense-making?
~lyv
2/15/2004 c1 80Plato's Optic Runaway
MM...the first line instantly programs the hot, sensuous confusion being the very substance of love. And the title amplifies the idea of perlexity, of things so diverse fusing together. Well done! And just in time for Valentine's, what a lovely holiday, sure.
80Plato's Optic RunawayMM...the first line instantly programs the hot, sensuous confusion being the very substance of love. And the title amplifies the idea of perlexity, of things so diverse fusing together. Well done! And just in time for Valentine's, what a lovely holiday, sure.
2/15/2004 c1 138Lina Inverse
I'm not sure what hispid means... But I like the contrast in the 2nd line ^^
138Lina InverseI'm not sure what hispid means... But I like the contrast in the 2nd line ^^