for Deja Vù4/2/2004 c1 Shaun
Very entertaining and interesting. I loved the twist at the end. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Very entertaining and interesting. I loved the twist at the end. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
3/21/2004 c1 
26Endless Nightmares
Hello-
Enjoyable read. It was really long, but very well written. I liked it.
26Endless NightmaresHello-
Enjoyable read. It was really long, but very well written. I liked it.
2/28/2004 c1 64Derek Dogan
How can this only have one review? I like it. The one-liners you used for a few days added some good humor. The ending seemed -slightly- hasty/contrived, but still nice overall. It's a great departure from your usual "horror/murder from beginning to end" types. Not that those didn't rock, as well...
64Derek DoganHow can this only have one review? I like it. The one-liners you used for a few days added some good humor. The ending seemed -slightly- hasty/contrived, but still nice overall. It's a great departure from your usual "horror/murder from beginning to end" types. Not that those didn't rock, as well...
2/15/2004 c1 van Easnaht
Pretty good, though the repeating-day plot is getting kind of old to me, probably just me(started with Groundhog Day then it seems every TV series in existance used it as a plot for one episode). I think it could be interesting to have a story about a person where *every* day of their life repeats until it's perfect.
Pretty good, though the repeating-day plot is getting kind of old to me, probably just me(started with Groundhog Day then it seems every TV series in existance used it as a plot for one episode). I think it could be interesting to have a story about a person where *every* day of their life repeats until it's perfect.